Title: The Skies Are Ablaze
Genre: Science Fiction
Author: figbassist75

It's lovely to see your awesome book back!

I love your cover, even though I would love to see the writing of the title a little bolder (although this is just an observation). Your description is very detailed which is usually a good thing but I would suggest trying to use less complex words and increase the mystery of the plot a bit. I only say this because although your description is well written, you want to capture the attention of your readers and it would work better if your description was as exciting as it's flawless. (this is a compliment of course!)

I was a little concern over the warning at the beginning of your first chapter. Although I understand how frustrating it must be to answer questions from readers all the time, I personally wouldn't take this approach. But as a writer, I understand your reasons.

Loved the video diaries at the beginning of the chapters, I thought it was a very smart way to introduce your characters. And gave a very nice touch to your story.

Your writing skills are impressive! Too impressive actually. Halfway down your chapter and I began to understand why your readers were left confused...your writing is flawless, your descriptions are vivid, extraordinarily magnified and completely out of this world (literally) but one thing that I know about most writers...is that by intensifying the writing you sometimes take the focus of the plot away.

And here is where my opinion gets thorn apart because for one hand I think your writing is completely flawless and the way you recreate every scene is crazily insane but for another hand, I know that by doing that you sacrifice that engagement that glues your readers to your book from the very beginning. Maybe try to alleviate the amount of info on your very first two chapters and then raise the bar up again, let them gradually absorb your plot.

I still think that your writing is amazingly well structured, I just think that not every reader will get that, but either way, you shouldn't change it for anybody, but perhaps you can adapt...(another suggestion)

I'm impressed and I'm glad that I got to read it though. Congrats!

I would rate this book 4.9 out of 5

I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book and we wish you and your bookie nothing but the very best💖
claudushka

⭐️Book star 5