Title: The Callous and the conceited
Genre: Teen Fic
User: ekonorra

Cover/ Title Description;
In my opinion the cover is very pretty, It makes one attracted to it in seconds. The way you protray your story is interesting. Very impressive. The description though would have been better if you put in a more explicit way without giving out too much information. Now, You cant be having the backof your book in a about 400 words right? The more the shorter the more the readers would want to read.
Using pictures of actors to give a more prominant imagination to your reader is a very bold way of sharing how exactly the said figure is drawn in your mind. It makes one easier to have theirs in their personal imagination.

First Impressions;
Curiosity sits at a close distance when your story unfolds, descriptions are perfectly put forth. The story has a good start. It made me want to read more for the way you build her character and sweet Ollie's is very catchy. Though your moments dont last long enough and are quite fast tracked in my opinion. The story has a great foundation, so putting out in a more mind full way where certain parts last longer. Like Jacob and Isla had a very rushed meeting. The slower they meet the more the reader gets excited to read until they actualy cross paths. Your point of bringing their meeting is cool but making it interesting is what matters.

Character Development;
Isla is a somewhat vibrant girl with a love for reading. She tries her best to live not being depressed with her mothers loss. Doing things she loves. But her character doesnt really show emotions, literally not at all. She was practically molested by Ryo but the next moment she admires the sun and remembers her mother. It doesnt sit right. After such an encounter she's got to atleast be upset about such an incident. Those arent normal stuff no matter what it may sound like.

Plot/ Conclusion;
Whatever your plot is, your a goes a bit out if it. Though the book started off pretty interestingly it started getting boring by the third chapter. Sadly, The constant jabbering before each chapter gets very annoying since it breaks the excitement that the reader possesses. If would be better if you kept them short and sweet and at the end.

The book is based on how Isla and Jacob Callum fall in love. It would make the book more worth while reading if it focus's more on their journey of falling for each other rather than beating around the bush. The use of languague gives the book a rich sense of value but the discription of others and the parts that focus on others feels like its not nessasry. Perhaps they could have been introduced once a few Jacob and Isla moments. In all the books, useful, but it could better if more time and thought were put in.

Reviewed by faazilaraiza

I would like to say a big THANK YOU to faazilaraiza for helping me with the reviews, she did an amazing job 💞 Thank you Bun Bun 😘
-Claudushka

I would rate this book 3 out of 5

Book Star 3