Title: Selene
Genre: Fantasy
User: PrayashaNanda

Cover/Title & Summary:
Your cover draws my attention, and I love the blend of colors. It gives me mystical vibes. Your description must be one of the best stories that I have ever read in a book. It can be a challenge to nail a perfect description that emphasizes your story without unveiling the plot and still fascinate your readers. You accomplished all of that beautifully.

First Impressions:
I think the little introduction that you gave to Selene and the other characters was not only sweet but allows your readers to connect with them before start reading your story. I think it's a beautiful touch that compliments your book.

The first chapter gives a beautiful first glimpse of your plot, and the sun vs. moon twin sister powers idea is brilliant. I think it has great potential for an epic storyline.

Now comes the hard part because I happened to know the writer behind the words, and I see the talent underneath, but I need to give you my honest opinion...

The plot is fantastic! The delivery is not so great, and why? Because you are skipping crucial steps in your story, it's missing a huge deal of detailed description of the surrounding in each scenario. It's also missing the emotional side of some of the characters. Plus, some links could have been enlightening, such as why is the twin parents living in different kingdoms and why is their mother so cold? Those are details that can leave a more powerful impact on your readers.

From my point of view... You have this AMAZING plot that, if portrayed well, could be one of the best plots in its a category. Yet the only problem is that it's missing essential steps. This is frustrating to me because you described everything so beautifully well on the summary, but I don't see that same perfection in the book itself...

Character Development:
It was a challenge to judge this, only because you kept changing characters. So it was a little hard to relate or connect with any of them. Although I saw how well you transaction from character to character, you gave them personalities, I think because it was so much going on, you weren't able to portray them well enough. If you slow down and pace the story a little slower and add more details and also magnify your descriptions, then it would make the story feel more completed and also help your readers to engage and connect with your book in a more profound way.

Plot:
The plot is phenomenal. I loved the idea behind it, and no matter what, if you have a story, then hun, you can make whatever changes that you need, but the most important part of the book you accomplished with flying colors. You just need more details and perhaps a better organization when it comes to the presentation of your chapters. But you have a solid foundation, which is the most important thing, in my opinion.

Conclusion:
There are a few things that, in my opinion, you need to have when trying to write a great book. And I'll say it in order from the most important to the least important:

1.Plot
2.Characters
3.Detailed descriptions
4.Strong beginnings and epic endings (chapters)
5.Writing Style

I feel like you have the first two perfectly done, but you need to work on your descriptions. Not only because this will make the story feel more completed but also because it will help your readers to be able to visualize your story. Us writers kind of think that our readers somehow can read our thoughts and follow the same way of thinking as we naturally do when writing our story, but they don't because they are not in our head. So if we don't help them to envision our ideas, then they will be lost along the way. Make sure that you are writing every little detail that you have in your mind when writing each chapters.

Strong beginnings help to engage readers to the chapter, and epic endings leave your readings looking forward to your next update. Plus, it's a lot of fun to keep your readers on the edge of their seats. You should definitely try ;)

When it comes to your writing style, I genuinely think that it's beautiful.

You are an amazing writer and a very talented one because you came up with a unique and exciting plot. Do you know how many highly qualified writers don't even know how to do that? You can fix mistakes or add more details, but you can't be a talented writer without talent... but Asha you have that! All the other stuff you can improve but the most important thing and the one thing that you can't learn... It's having the heart of a writer, and you got it. So please, keep writing! If you want to talk about this review in more detail, you know how to find me :)

Reviewed by claudushka

I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book. I hope I didn't offend you in any way. Remember that you are already an amazing writer. I'm just trying to help you to improve. In no way shape or form, I think I think that you are not an excellent writer. Feel free to reach out if you need anything else❤️

I would rate this book 3.9 out of 5

Book Star 4