Title: Sariel
Genre: Science Fiction
Author: MistickMage

Although I don't see the connection between the title to the story yet, it does stand out to me. The title also makes it mysterious.

The description is too long in my opinion, most readers don't get tempted to read such a long description, besides I think you reveal too much in it, and there's no room for suspense. So I would suggest making it shorter and add a bit of mystery to it, so you can engage your readers a little bit more.

I couldn't have asked for a better beginning of a chapter, I loved how you transition from the future to the past. Flashbacks can seem confusing when done at the wrong timing, but in this case, it felt right. 

And now I understand the connection between the title and cover! The Guardian angels! It's amazing how I miss that from your description. I absolutely love the concept and how you choose to tell your story. The transitions between past and present are very well incorporated into the story.

Sariel character is very well developed, as well as the other characters in your story.

I would just suggest for you to add a little splash of mystery to the end of your chapters, just to give a little more flare to the end of the chapter and create curiosity leading towards the next update.

Thank you for sharing your story, it really felt magical.

I would rate this book 4.8 out of 5

I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book and we wish you and your bookie nothing but the very best💖
claudushka

⭐️Book Star 5