Title: Our Karma is Still Pending
Genre: Fantasy
User: PrayashaNanda

Cover/title:
Your cover goes hand and hand with your title. I would probably suggest for you to lower your name a bit more, but of course, that's only a suggestion. I'm not sure if the cover would stand out, especially among other fantasy books. I would love to see something that would create a more significant impact. So maybe consider different options in order to capture your readers.

Summary:
I loved your summary! Which doesn't happen a lot as a reader. I don't know about other readers but the summary is what makes me open a book or not. And in your case I would definitely be jumping to the first page. You raised questions which are always a plus when you want to drag your reader's attention.

First Impression:
The quotes were a nice way to start your book. It gave a special touch. You started your first chapter exceptionally well. Your simplicity yet very well constructed grammar made your book a joy to read.

Character development:
You paced the story well, which made it easy for me as a reader to absorb every bit of information. You detailed everything beautifully. Your build-up your main character very thoroughly and was easy to connect to your story because of that. You also introduced other characters smoothly into the story without leaving your readers lost or overwhelmed.

Plot:
I was happily surprised by your plot. You know how to keep your readers engaged by adding the right amount of mystery throughout the chapters, but you also end and start your chapters with the same impact. I felt engaged from the very first word to the very last.

Conclusion:
The straightforward writing style was easy to keep up with, and although you didn't use any complex words, the effect was the same if not greater. I loved the concept, and I enjoyed reading it.

I would rate this book 5/5

I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book and we wish you and your bookie nothing but the very best💖
claudushka

Book star 5.5