Title: New Era
Genre: Fantasy
Author: Birdpaw

Your cover gives me the creeps in a good way. I absolutely loved it! The title leaves room for questions so it's definitely the right combination. Your description was good, but I was lacking a mystery...it didn't really grab my attention to read your book at first look You want your readers to feel completely engaged to open your book.

Your prologue was beautifully presented. The way you decided to describe the wolves in the darkness seems something out of a bestseller book. I was intrigued and very impressed.

I loved the fact that you decided to start your first chapter with Adara, was really easy to relate to her. Your eye for surroundings is beautiful, and you seem to mirror your character's emotions well, even though in some moments I thought you could go further into their lives and feelings towards certain situations. I felt like you were holding back at times. As a writer, you should allow yourself to let go and just let your imagination to flow. But of course, this is merely my personal view. Overall your writing is already very impressive.

I loved the concept of your plot. You paced the story well and you buildup your characters very strongly. I don't personally like stories that have more than one or 2 pov's, but I understood why you would want to give your characters a voice. To be completely honest I think you did a good at changing pov's without making it seem too confusing. But I think that might impact the lack of connection between your readers and your story. Personally, as a reader, it threw me off a little, because I was constantly changing my perspective from the story due to a different pov in every chapter.

One thing that I would definitely recommend would be to add more suspense to the way you finish every chapter. I understand that because you switch characters point of view, it might be hard to create certain cliffhangers but would be nice to raise your reader's curiosity by adding some mystery.

I would rate this book 4.5 out of 5.

I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book and we wish you and your bookie nothing but the very best💖
claudushka

⭐️Book star: 4