Never Dating You Again|| General Fiction
Title : Never Dating You Again
Genre: General Fiction
Author: - snowcrystal-
I love your cover, it really emphasis your title and I think it works beautifully! Your description really highlights what's your book is about and again it blends perfectly with the cover and title. The only thing that I would suggest would be for you to exclude Reece's name from the first paragraph in your description and only reveal that he is Sarah's ex by the 3rd paragraph instead. So you can keep the mystery a few more seconds and of course, raise a little more curiosity.
I was highly engaged in your chapter from the very beginning to the very end. You definitely know how to keep your readers entertained.
You paced your story beautifully well, and again the character development is excellent as well!
I'm seriously considering to kidnap Cassie as my best friend...the chemistry between the two best friends is hilarious yet super cute!
There's some serious rule-breaking of the girl's code in this book. I love how you portrayed every character point of view and how they connect with Sarah and contribute to the story. Bringing a stepsister as the new girlfriend of your ex is definitely adding drama to the storywhich is always a good thing, of course.
I was a little concerned if the flashback of Sarah and Reece's past was a bit too long, I would reconsider making it into small flashbacks perhaps, but please take this as an observation only because is merely my own personal view.
When I saw your description, I must admit that I was secretly scared that this would become a little cliche. Although that feeling completely vanished as began reading your book.
I personally felt engaged reading it, I enjoyed the funny scenes and even fallen in love with your characters. Please keep writing and I wish you all the best!
I would rate this book 4.7 out of 5
I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book and we wish you and your bookie nothing but the very best💖
claudushka
⭐️Book star: 5
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