Erivale: The lost Princess||Fantasy
Title: Erivale: The lost Princess
Genre: Fantasy
Author: KroseWriter
Your cover is definitely unique and somehow goes perfectly with your title. Your description is very well written and raises a lot of curiosity.
Your author's note took me by surprise! I think it's people like you who make Wattpad special. Your story will for sure motivate a lot of otter writers. Let's just say that my expectations for your book are extremely high right now...
You capture my full attention as soon as I started to read your book. The opening scene was very intense and highlighted my reader senses right from the first written word.
You definitely know how to start an engaging chapter but I was wishing for the same feeling at the end of each chapter. You end it with a hint of wonder but judging by your capability of creating high engaging scenes, I was definitely waiting for more.
I loved the concept and the way you built your plot. Your main character is easy to like. The mystery and the constant thrilling in your chapters really make this book stand out. As for characters, I was wondering why
Amberleigh had no real connections in the real world, would be interesting to see the perspective of someone from her real-life towards what she goes through every other night.
Your plot seems unique, your character development is really good (even though I can only judge by Amberleigh at this point). Your writing style is excellent and you are more than able to write with a very realistic view. It was like that I was in your book, especially in the most intense scene, which makes you an outstanding writer.
I would rate this book 4.9 out of 5
I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book and we wish you and your bookie nothing but the very best💖
claudushka
⭐️Book star: 5
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