Title: Bright Eyes
Genre: Fantasy
User: _lazarein

Cover/Title & Summary:
Your cover is AMAZING! I remember that last time I was concerned that it wasn't very catchy, and although I think you kept a similar scenario this would definitely catch my attention. I love it!

Your description went from 1 to a million. I think it introduces the story incredibly well and it's really engaging. You kept the suspense but magnified a few loosen strings that were not holding your summary together. Right now, I think that it's not only perfect but irresistible! Well done :)

First Impressions:
I was smiling all through chapter 1... When I first read your book, I was so frustrated because I saw your among talent between the lines but the way that the story was presented it really clouded your brilliant plot. This time around, I was not lost at all, I was hooked up from the very first word to the very last, and I couldn't wait to read the next chapter. So well, don't on leave a powerful ending and an engaging beginning. It wasn't a dull moment in your story. You also switch character beautifully, and I was always aware of the change of scenarios and the different characters.

Character Development:
I was impressed by how well you were able to keep portraying each character so profoundly. I also appreciated the fact that you introduced them at your own pace, it allowed me to get to know them. The fact that you then blended them in the same scene so smoothly really made a great transition between different scenario and created an excellent atmosphere for character interaction. 

Plot:
I loved your plot the first time I read it, but I think I just fell in love with it this time around. You mixed mystery, fantasy, and suspense in one place, which only made your story more interesting. You gave personality to every character, which is so important when playing out your plot. I truly believed that you brought this story to life and the changes that you imply only emphasized the great action that you already had. I think this is one of my favorite fantasy books of all times!

Conclusion:
Ok I have a confession... When I noticed that you unpublished your book after my last review, I was concerned because, despite my review, I genuinely thought that you were a fantastic writer. But I was happy to see you back at writing. Now that I've seen the result... I'm kind of emotional 🥺; your book went from a 3... To a 5.5 start...

I'm so happy for you, and I'm honored that I got to reread it and to rate you the highest rate possible because you earned it!

I envy you seriously! You took every suggestion on board, and exceed any possible expectation before reading your book for the second time. You really raised from the ashes and created a masterpiece. I can see this book being made into a movie if you want me to be completely honest. That's how great you think your work is... I wish you nothing but the very best! I'm so proud of your achievement! Congrats :)

Reviewed by claudushka

I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book. I hope I didn't offend you in any way. Remember that you are already an amazing writer. I'm just trying to help you to improve. In no way shape or form, I think I think that you are not an excellent writer. Feel free to reach out if you need anything else❤️

I would rate this book 5 out of 5

Book Star 5.5