Title: Amethyst 1. Inception
Genre: Fantasy
Author: booklored

Your cover is unbelievably unique! It definitely stands out. Also the title and cover go perfectly together.

On your description, you added the amazing news about your book being added to the Wattpad NA Oficial Fantasy reading list (congrats!!!!)! Although it's amazing news and you should be so proud, I would suggest adding it by the end of the description instead of the top. Also, although your description is very well written, I would suggest adding some questions at the end just to make it more intriguing (but please take it as a suggestion only).

As a reader, I really appreciate the author' notes and the aesthetics are amazing by the way!

I could notice how vivid your writing is straight from the beginning. It felt like I was standing right in from of your character watching their every move. From an emotional perspective, you were also able to translate your character's feelings which adds to the amazing job that you did in the character development.

Your writing style is excellent and I found your grammar flawless. You also started your chapter very strongly and I was happily surprised that you were able to finish it always with a little twist or suspense. But not only that, the all way through your chapters was very engaging and interesting.

The little touches that you add to every chapter like the banners and quotes really make you stand out.

The only thing that I would suggest would be for you to add a pov on each chapter, in the beginning, you narrated your story on the 3rd person but by chapter 3 it was on the 1st person. So to avoid any possible confusion I would add which character are you basing your point of view on.

You have a very very special book, and you should be proud!

I would rate this book 4.9 out of 5.

I apologize for any typos. Thank you for allowing us to review your book and we wish you and your bookie nothing but the very best💖
claudushka

⭐️Book star: 5