Rainstep

She-cat

About 40 moons

Blue-grey, Black stripes, Ice blue eyes

Kind, fun, loves playing with kits

Good hunter

Didn't understand the warrior code as an apprentice easily distracted, hot headed

Mate-Lightningtail

Kits-Stormheart, Cloudwatcher, Windfur

Family- Ashpool(aunt), Tawnyheart(mother), Branchfur(father), Hailstorm(Brother)

Backstory-to be revealed in Rainsteps Choice

Dusky_bannanagirl

What I like-I like how your character has good and bad bits about them, one thing that annoys me sometimes in forms (I don't rant about it though) is when I'm the personality, people will just put all the good things and not one fault

Is she a Mary Sue?- no, not at all, From what info I was given, she seems perfectly fine, with a mix of good and bad things about her, She's not perfect, that's a good thing, everyone has faults except when most people have created them to be the perfect person they want to be 😉