Chapter Three The Traning Under The Star Wow! You only misspelled one word!
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Chapter Three The Traning Under The Stars You said that already.

Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now . Blackstar and his nonexistent army never tried to hurt your pathetic family.

StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to show you how to fight!" She just beat a leader. I think she can fight, Firestar imposter.

"Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new." Of course it is! She hasn't even been an apprentice for TEN FREAKING SECONDS!!!

"Ok." They went to the frost togather and the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." What bodies? And why do they need to learn how to be a dog? Woof woof?

"Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was ready for anything! No you're not you conceited, egotistical little brat. *slaps her face*

"ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit.

"Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at FireStar not Giving hiM time to attakc. "She hit his side he didn't move he was to surprise.d she clawed him and he started bledding. "wow StarPaw" he said ".Your doing awesome." "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was doing that god was she relly special like the porphesy meowed? HEY!!! YOU CANNOT DO THAT TO A LEADER SHEATH YOUR CLAWS YOU CANT HAVE THEM OUT IM GONNA ***** SLAP YOU!!!

"Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," Good job. Snarl at her.

"OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys and her fur. Kawaii? Uhg, I'm trying not to barf.

"Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was alittle tired. Firestar, come on! This can't be the real Firebae. As I stated before, he's an imposter.

"Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry." Nope! Elders and kits eat first, sucker!

"Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_. Fun? She CUT you.

Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. Don't lock up the stars! What did they ever do to you?

Locking upn at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you think well ever be up there." No. You'll be burning in Hell.

"Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!" JAZZPAW LIES!!!

"Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) they were best friends. She loked up at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her head. So it's wrong to be gay or lesbian? Dang, Starbutt.

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