Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 I already wrote a couple of paragraphs that were better than this entire book. Would you like me to show you my skills again?
"Starpaw should be exiled!" yowled Dawnsparkle fiercely, glaring menacingly at the purple she-cat. Starpaw scrambled backwards.
"What?" she exclaimed, her rainbow eyes full of fear. Jayfeather stepped forward. "I agree. She's a disgrace to our Clan!" he added angrily.
The Clan muttered amongst themselves, nodding.
Starpaw's fur bristled when she heard a familiar voice, but it was tainted with scorn. "She should be killed instead!" Starpaw turned and saw Jazzpaw, her large blue eyes narrowed to slits.
The Clan had formed a circle around the trembling she-cat, all glaring and shouting. Even Starpaw's sisters.
Starpaw looked up at highledge, seeking help from Firestar, the one cat who believed in her. She was shocked to see that his green gaze held nothing but hate and spite.
Starpaw had nothing left. She was alone, an outcast. The cat did not struggle when one by one, the Clan attacked her, and the last thing she saw were Firestar's fiery eyes.
SEE!? I CAN WRITE SO MUCH BETTER!!!

StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos. I so badly wanted that to say "slipping on the moss". XD

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr. They would be even more brilliant if you spelled it right.

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. You can't just ask. Your leader or deputy must put you on a patrol. Besides, the first thing an apprentice does is tour the territory.

"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 Maybe he just wanted to borrow a vole.

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. Dude! Chill out! It was only Blackstar! He didn't bring his whole freaking Clan!

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" No, Sandstorm is a good hunter.

StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. You tapped him in the nose. That does not make you a good fighter...or fihgter...

thnkx and ples no more flams *flames the story maniacally*