Okay let's talk

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Why have I seen this too much? It makes no sense

Help, I have become fucking Voltron trash.

Anyways, lemme get straight to the point.

Don't make ur characters exotic

And by that I mean it's ok to have normal characters that don't have golden eyes and pink hair.

because that's just-

no

I get it if hair dye's their style or something, or if all ur characters have gold eyes because they're aliens, but if they're normal. Make them look normal.

Going off that, a normal group of people aren't all white. Give them diversity, I beg you. (As i stated in my other chapters)

Hell, you could even have a character with blue skin. idk, if they're like aliens or something. (My mind is on Voltron right now, so help me. I mean, the galra have purple skin)

But basically, Make their looks match their parents too, because that's where their DNA comes from. So they GOTTA LOOK SOMEWHAT LIKE THEIR PARENTS.

If you make your character with color-changing eyes, and color changing hair, your on your way to making a Mary/Gary Sue.

So don't. fucking. do. that.

Got it?