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"What she said?" Mukthi asked excitedly, abhi smiled. Navya just shaping her nail.

"She said she needs time. Let's hope for best." Cabir said sitting beside Mukthi, Navya went and say in his lap, Manik rolled his eyes and sat on his bar chair, drinking his wine.

"So now all fine..then what are you thinking for?" Navya said roaming her hands on Cabir body.

"Nandini." Navya rolled her eyes, as from the day she meet him, he always thinking about his sister.

"Baby, she is here na..let's talk about us." Navya said caressing his cheeks, he frown at her.

"What about us?" Cabir asked.

"Cabir it's been three years we are together, you never said you love me, but I know you love me so much. Let's get marry." Navya asked excitedly. Mukthi and Abhi glanced at each other, then Navya and Cabir.

Cabir sighed, "Navya listen, I want my family back then only I can think about all. Ok." Navya become angry and stood up.

"Family family family...how many days Haan? You thought left them na. Forget about them." Navya shouted. Cabir glared ar her. Manik and Mukthi glared at her.

"Navya watch your tongue." Abhi said strictly.

"Haan, always close my mouth. He doing everything for that family...killed a guy too.. police behind us. But..." Navya shouted, Cabir looked away in anger.

"Navya I said I will take care. Why are you getting so worked up?" Manik strictly order.

Navya rolled her eyes, "I can see how capo." She dashed out from there.

Mukthi rubbed Cabir arms who stressed out, "Cabir, it's fine. She will come around."

Cabir sighed and looked at her,"I don't care about her mutkhi, she somehow will come behind me. I am thinking about my sister only. this only hope." Cabir sat holding his head.

Navya who heard this hit the wall in angry,"I thought you will come behind me, but...still thinking about your sister. She will come na..i will see her." She smirked looking away.

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"What you think should I go?" Nandini asked Pihu looking out.

Getting no response she turned to see Pihu smiling at something in phone, she rolled her eyes thinking her crush or some celebrity.

"Pihuuuu." She sat on bed with jerk, throwing her phone on bed, "uff you scared me."

Nandini giggled, "I asked what should I do now?"

Pihu seriously thought now, "Baby you been away from him six years, the pain you gone through can no one heal except your brother. " Nandini frown.

"How?"

"Somewhere you need his love na..your heart need it right." Pihu asked Nandini nodded yes, "Then, do this. Leave there, he might show more love for your forgiveness, let him but don't give any response. He should realise how much it will pain if our loved one ignore us." Pihu gave a evil smriked.

"Devil you are Pihu. Won't he be hurt?" Nandini asked innocently, Pihu rolled her eyes.

"Miss. Mother Teresa, always don't be selfless giving all. He wants to taste his medicine too, he gave pain tk you and your mother." Pihu said angrily, somewhere it's hurt her saying this for Cabir. She don't know about her own feelings.

"Ok calm down Mahakali, I will inform him but...."

"But what." Pihu asked.

Nandini looked down sadly, "How to inform him, I don't have his number." Pihu goarned.

"I know you do this, they have number to warden, I will get from her." Pihu said and went out, Nandini sighed looking at her hands.

"Ayyappa!!give me strength, I know I will hurt my brother. But please keep me in control like Pihu said." She prayed and lay down.

Pihu brought their number, dialed it.

"Will you come with me?' Nandini asked Pihu which shocked her.

"Nandini how can I?" Pihu asked looking down the call going.

"Pihu please, I might not have that much strength to take care all., Plesse be with me."

"Hello." They heard Cabir voice, Nandini looked at Pihu innocently who smiled and nodded yes.

"Ha..It's me.. Nandini." Nandini said, holding Pihu hands.

"Baccha...thankgod you called..What happened any issue??" Cabir said in one go, Pihu rolled her eyes as if he care for her now.

"Hmm....i have decided.." Nandini said looking at Pihu who shown thumbs up.

"What is it baccha?" Cabir voice held so much fear.

"I.i..Will come...But will be there only for limit time. If i don't like I will leave next moment." Nansini said strictly, but it came out sweetly, Pihu giggled.

Cabir chuckled, "ok baccha...i will arrange all."

"And i....."

"Yes baccha."

"My friend, Pihu to will come." Nandini said hesitately. Pihu bit her lips.

"It's fine, no issue. I will arrange room for her too. Can i pick you up tomorrow?" Cabir asked.

Nandini looked at Pihu who whispered, weekend.

"Weakened..ok" Nandini said,.

"Ok baccha..i will come and pick you up, be ready." Cabir said.

"Ok..." Nandini said and don't know what to say next, Pihu took th phone and cut the call before Cabir speak.

"Awesome, maintain this strict with him and be little rude Nandu. It's look like you speaking to kid." Pihu said Nandini pouted.

"I am trying." Nandini said, Pihu giggled and hugged her. They both spend time together, packing and visit her mother, orphanage.

In manik penthouse, Cabir jumping here and there, after hearing Nandini coming, ! Mukthi and Abhi so happy to see real happiness is his face. He arranging all according to Cabir wish, he know she like white, more toys, simple room he set like that, even her friend room same.

Manik was happy too but didn't show, as his buddy is again back.

"Uff...Manikk come fast man..i am ready but you." Cabir shouted looking at his watch.

Manik came down buttoning his shirt, "Why are dancing in middle of hall? I said na i will come."

"Time running Manik, let get her soon." Cabir said like Baby wanting his chocolate.

"Capo, get him soon there. Or else he will become crazy baby again." Abhi said hiting Cabir back who pouted. Mukthi giggled, Navya stood away ignoring all.

"Ok, come. Lets bring them." Manik said walking out, Cabir jumping like kid, run behind  him, which made Abhi and mutkhi smile.

"Why are standing like this?" Mukthi asked Navya.

"What should I do? Dance?" Navya said, mutkhi rolled her eyes.

"Navya what happened to you? Why are behaving rude?" Abh asked, Navya rolled her eyes.

"Rude? Me or you guys? You know how much I love him, but he never confessed or said it, now his old family is important for him." Navya said with tears, which Abhi know fake.

"Navya don't worry, i will speak to Cabir and Manik about his. If Nandini comes here, he will alright. Ok." Mukthi said with concern, Navya nodded rubbing her tears which no even flowing. Abhi rolled his eyes and walked away.

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"Baccha this much only." Cabir asked seeing two suitcase.

"Yes." Nandini said looking down, acutally avoiding seeing Manik who's eyes covered with glass.

"Ok,..John keep it inside." Cabir said, one men took their suitcase and kept in car.

"Hmm..You guys don't have problem right..me coming?" Pihu asked like kid, Cabir chuckled, Manik nodded ni.

"No..Even I know you will be so excited to be in Malhotra mansion." Cabir said making her blush, Nandini eye widen seeing it.

Pihu!! blushing!!!both are enemies!!

"Let's leave." Manik thick voice came making Nandini all time nervous, both nodded and sat back seat, Cabir took passenger seat, Manik sat in driver seat and drive away.

Cabir and Pihu was talking many things, between this they didn't notice, Manik glancing at Nandini now and then through mirror, or even Nandini seeing him secretly.

"I do that..." Both looked at Pihu and Cabir who laughing at something, Nandini had smile seeing her brother and friend smiling and comfortable.

"I much say my sister has great company unlike me." Cabur said looking at manik who glared at him.

"Why mr. Malhotra is too bad?" Pihu asked knowing his teasing manim.

"So boring..sometime I think is he human or not." Cabir said, laughing with Pihu. Nandini poke her legs eyeing don't laugh, but Pihu who will she listen, laughing. Manik ignoring it.

"We came." Cabir said, when car enter a big gate, Nandini and Pihu was amazed to see mansion and whole estates filled with greeny, the saw pool at near by garden at right side.

Car stopped in way, four got down, Nandini was admiring the beauty but someone was eye on her too.😏

"Baccha you like it." Cabir asked excitedly, Nandini just nodded and looked away which made him sad but he boosted up.

"Come lets do inside." Cabir said, Pihu and Nandini walked in with him, Manik walked behind.

Mukthi and Abhi smiling at him, Nandini and Pihu too smiled.

"It's so beautiful." Pihu said looking aorund.

"Thankq. I am Mukthi, Cabir friend. I know Nandini but you?" Mutkhi said, giving Nandini a hearty smile which she respond back.

"I am Pihu, Nandini childhood friend, but I never seen you." Pihu said.

"Ohh Pihu Mathur, your father is commissioner right." Mukthi said, Pihu nodded. Mukthi looked at Manik who nodded no.

"Hii I am Abhimanyu." Abhi said smiling, Pihu frown seeing him then shook her head.

"I am Nandini."

"Pihu." Both said smiling as he become ther favorite at first meet istelf.

"I know you both beautiful girls." Abhi said smiling,getting a hit from Mukthi who glared.

"Sisters... meri Ma." Abhi said side hugging her, Nandini and pihu smiled.

"So cute you are." Pihu exclaimed, all smiled except Manik who looking at Nandini.

"Come let me show you rooms." Cabir said taking Nandini attention, which he was successful.

They all moved to second floor, where two room present.

"This is Pihu you room and next one is baccha yours." Cabir said smiling, Nandini looked at Pihu

"Hmm..can we stay in same room, Nandini don't stay alone." Pihu said, Manik and Cabir frown, she always to her mtoher to give separate room.

"Sure no problem, you guys take any room." Mukthi said smiling, before the ho in.

"Baby.." all turned to see Navya came running and hugged Cabir, which made Nandini frown and Pihu look away.

"Navya..." Cabir said removing her hands, seeing Nandini making face.

"So your sister is here. Let me introduce." Navya smirked at Nandini and Pihu, "Hi, I am Navya Kapoor, cabir's girlfriend, your soon to be sister in law." Cabir palmed his face, Pihu looked down controlling her tears, she don't know why it's hurt.

Two pairs of eye saw her tears, Nandini ignored Navya hands and moved inside her room, taking Pihu.

Navya made angry face, Abhi palmed his mouth to control his laugh, Mukthi hit his arms to stop it. Manik and Cabir was amazed to see Nandini behaving like this to someone.

"I can't...see her face." Abhi shown Navya who fuming in angry, looked at Cabir.

"See how your sister ignoring me." Navya said whining like kid.

"Navya, she just came. With her brother, me itself, she behaving like stranger. You..give her time." Cabir said moving away in angry.

Manik glanced at the room and walked away with Abhi, who giggling increasing Navya anger.

Mutkhi about to talk to her, Navya walked away. Mukthi held her head and went behind Manik and Abhi.

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(Nandini and Pihu room..imagine little bit big)

"Nice room na." Nandini said looking around, Pihu nodded yes didn't talk.

Nandini frown, stood infornt of her, "What happened? Why you became silent." Pihu nodded no smiling.

"I am fine Nandini." Pihu said, Nandini glared ar her.

"Stop hiding things from me." Nandini said showing Pihu phone which has cabir photo. For one week Nandini seeing Pihu behaviour.

One pair of eyes is Nandini who saw pihu tears...another🤔

Pihu chin wobbled up, hugged Nandini and cried, Nandini rubbed her back. She know the pain of love, she too love someone who never love her.

"Don't cry, my Pihu is best. You will get someone love more then anyone." Nandini said, Pihu nodded no like kid and hide more into Nandini arms.

Nandini sighed, both sat like that for few seconds until Pihu get tried and sleep.

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Ufff....2000+ words😭😭😭😭..Sorry while writing forgot to add Manan part😅..Will add next part for sure.

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