Heyyy Candies,
How are y'all doing 🤗...it's me! And I'm so excited to announce that my next review is going to be on a very sweet book, "The Shy Spy" by Blood_doctor .
This book is sooo sweet😂 and I honestly don't want to spoil the review or make my compliments sound so cheesy this early
Well I'm going to be reviewing it under the following headings

Plot development:
I honestly love love love everything about this book. The plot is completely mind-blowing, not like anything I've seen on Wattpad before. Great books are pretty difficult to come by on this app, but I'm so happy I actually had the opportunity to read this.
I love the plot of the story, it's not like the normal mafia book.
This book reminds me of "Her Secret Mission" by thriller_mystery_ . Like these two thriller books and their plots are completely mind blowing, absolutely wonderful. I love the way you allocated roles and personalities to each character...I love the way you mix the suspense with a bit of romance, astonishment and humour.
I was absolutely hooked and I'm begging to you please, please please complete it🥺
I can't wait for your next update.
I love the way you designed the plot, such that readers can't predict the next action.
The way you mixed humour with the whole thing is just WOW!
Like I love it so much that I'm giving it a 9.5/10

Character development:
I love the characters...there are no too much characters, just few major characters and that is absolutely a recipe for success.
As a reader, I wasn't confused about their personality, or their role in the whole story. I feel sorry for Chantria tho...I love the way you made Ryker a foil to Zagan. Hard to believe they're brothers tho.
I love Alice and Ezekiel...cute children
I love the personality you gave May as a foil to her sister.
I love the Williams, Eros and his sister...
I do hope something romantic happens between Zagan, Chantria and Ryker...maybe a love triangle
But I don't want to mess up the story...you're the writer and you honestly know what's best.
The story wasn't too fast paced.
Funny that you made Chantria have a namesake.
Well this story is amazing. I'm giving it 8.5/10

Book cover:
The book cover is good, though me as a reader looking for some thrill won't suspect that this book is actually a mafia/thriller book.
I guess a book of this sort should have a dark theme cause of the central idea of the book, or should have something more breathtaking...I humbly suggest you check out the cover of "Her Secret Mission" by thriller_mystery_ . Nonetheless, the book cover is cool
It's a 7/10

Grammatical erorrs:
There are some few errors. I did notice that you made use of "still" in place of "till" in most cases...I guess it's a typo.
Your punctuations were good, you made use of your period marks nicely...though these minor errors are just meant to brush up the story.
The corrections to errors are in bold and additional explanation in brackets.
Please if you don't understand anything, don't hesitate to bring my attention to it.
Here we go:

Chapter 1:

Seeing the angry and anxious look in her eyes made her want to stick her tongue out and scream ("the" not "those")

A good thing that honestly was intended to come out from her mouth, was something apologising (punctuation)

The man removed the first knife from her body and sank it deeper into her stomach repeatedly (I think this fits better)

Blood gushed out even more and with her already drained energy, she let the small reddy teddy fall from her tiny palm (punctuation and I think this fits better)

But her eyes were already becoming small as her gaze blurred

Some passersby stopped, while others ("passersby" not "passerbys" and I believe "stopped" alone is more appropriate)

Chapter 2:

What I'm not getting is why you would have the guts to spy on a serial killer, the one who stabbed a little girl fifteen times

"Okay fine. Since even I can't stop you, what are your tactics?"

She didn't for once think about it

Dela is dangerous, as we don't know who might get killed by the masked man today

He has always thought of holding a gun and shooting bad guys

After some minutes, they both packed the stuff and went outside (punctuation)

She knew she was about venturing into something dangerous, but she wasn't ready to back out either. (This fits better)

With him were some men and a lady whose eyes were fixed on the computer, she looked serious. (Punctuation)

This contract has been long pursued ("long" not "longed")

Chapter 3:

But didn't stop looking back till the car drove off

Meet Ezekiel, my friend's son (punctuation)

When she saw that he didn't reply...("didn't" not "hadn't")

"Hello there, can you hear me at all?" (Punctuation)

Her beauty would wave them off guard too

He helped her with the luggage and both of them went inside

Chantria kept moving back till she hit the wall. (This fits better)

He slapped himself multiple times till his cheeks began to hurt

She got to the room panting loudly (this definitely fits better)

She noticed someone behind her and increased her pace

Myles isn't a bad man, she thought, but she isn't ready for a romantic relationship

Chapter 4:
Unfortunately, those men had smarter plans than they did

Kudos on getting more enemies

He emphasized on the word "legal" ("on" not "at" and quotation marks should be used on legal here)

She tried all his fingers till she got to his left middle finger ("till" not "still" and "left middle finger" not "middle left finger")

Chapter 6:

He is the least I would want to know that this is a contract

She was facing the other side of the bed with her heart thumping  in her ribcage

It was time to go meet up with Ezekiel

Ryker has an elder brother (this fits better than "a older brother")

She hissed harshly recalling how he had thrown her away like a worthless bag

He walked to her and hugged her tightly that she could hardly breathe

Chapter 7:

I think I should just help with stalking her because you might fall in love with her

She stood up with a gun in her hand pointing it at his forehead

He walked gently with May on his right and April on his left, with their father walking behind (this fits better)

Some on the merry go round (not "Mary go round")

Do you stay on my street?

Why would I need to be friends with a brat?

Before they saw someone with blue sparkling eyes walk towards them (not "a blue sparkling eyes" and not "walk amidst them")

Stood up with an orange drink in his hand(not "on his hand")

Well the first girl thinks you guys live on the same street (the preposition "on" always goes with street)

She asked without thinking twice

At least he would support you blindly in all that you do

"There should be another way, Yetunde"

Really really dumb, so as to trump down the suspicion his brother has about you (this fits better)

"Thanks, Yetunde. What can I do without you"

Chapter 8:

All May thought of, was how Eros had talked to her (this fits better)

Eros looked at his sister and carried her on his shoulders

Chapter 9:

Her gaze fell on the soft bed

We also watched that killer kill a boy and put a yellow card in his cloth

Chapter 10:

Should she tell him that she was actually raped at the age of sixteen

General Review:
I love, love and love this book so much and please do well to complete it.
It's in my library so I can receive steady updates.
I honestly recommend this book to anyone looking for some thrill.
You wouldn't get bored while reading this...
The plot and characters are on point.
Overall rating: 9/10

NB:hey guys, I'm so sorry for the late review...and I'm assuring you that may edition is starting soon.
Have a lovely day and take care of yourself.

XOXO,
Candy lover
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