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My next review is going to be on "Daddy's Babies MXMXM (BL) 18+" by  Emily_max.
I'm so sorry for dropping this review late... honestly this isn't me and I'm really trying my best to give you guys the best review possible

I'm going to be reviewing this book under the following headings...

Plot development: Honestly, this is my first time reading a warewolf book nonetheless a warewolf LGBT book...I honestly loved this book, I love the fact you gave descriptions of each characters and you focused more on the emotional connection the reader has with your book. I was emotionally connected and gave rapt attention to this book.
I love the way you used suspense...I too was very scared when Kai stopped breathing, and was smirking when Mike was doing that pregnancy test.
The fact that you were able to balance the POVs and opinions of each major character was outstanding.
The way you managed the erotic scenes was also incredible. Many writers find it difficult to pen down a threesome 18+ book, but you did it extraordinarily well. As a reader reading a warewolf book for the first time, I was a bit confused cause of all those Ware wolf terms, but gradually I understood and went with the flow.
I absolutely love the storyline...it was progressive and not too rushed. Though the characters didn't face severe conflict or rigorous situations, the story still went along well. I give it 8/10

Character development: Each character was unique and had their different personalities.
Honestly as a first timer of ware wolf books, when I initially started reading, I got confused when you talked about Mike and Kai, Leo and Cain.
Like I was confused if they lived in the same body or...
But as an intellectual reader, I quickly understood.
But I would suggest maybe you give a little note at the beginning of the book, telling us that Kai and his wolf are the same person, just for us first timers.
I find it funny that Mike actually got pregnant😂
It was cute, and funny...
I'm giving it 8/10

Book cover:
The book cover is nice and really good, but considering the fact that this book has 3 protagonist I think it would be great if the book cover had three persons on it. That way, the reader would have much more understanding and have the edge to add it to their list, especially threesome lovers. I give it 7/10

Grammatical erorrs: You're a great writer with a brilliant imagination. Though I did notice few minor errors...these errors are so minor that you're even going to laugh at the end of this review 😂

The corrections to errors are in bold and additional explanation in brackets.
Please do not hesitate to draw my attention to any correction you don't understand or not clear with...

Chapter 1:
"You're so delicious Mike baby"
He said and I could feel my cheeks heating up in response to his comment ("his" not "my" and "I" is meant to be in capital letter cause it's a first person pronoun in the subjective case)

We could always feel each other and read our thoughts (I think this fits better)

He's pretty good at it since he doesn't want me to worry, but I always know when something is wrong(punctuation)

Kai thinks the same too, while I'm unsure(punctuation)

"I know you're worried Leo, but we love each other. You're my happiness, our happiness. I love you Leo, so does Cain and Kai" (punctuation and I think this fits better)

"You and Cain love love me, until you meet your mate" (punctuation)

"Leo, nothing bad is going to happen"(there's meant to be a comma after Leo...it fits better like this)

My twin roared out and the beta along with the others dropped to their knees

Chapter 2:

I won't have a problem making you kneel in front of your own pack, if you don't stop treating us like we're any less than you (there's meant to be a comma)

"I am not rejecting you. I want you, my wolf wants you"(punctuation)

Our wolves are very dominant though, especially Leo

Chapter 3:

"What do you want to know Ceol?" I asked as I continued to massage his ass cheeks (this fits better)

He can share this power with two people and I am one of them (I think it's better with "and" not full stop)

My clumsy twin often got hurt when we were twins and it was always me tending to his wounds, with Leo whining at the back of my head for hours. (The ones in bold fits better)

Your nipples become a little big when you're aroused, same goes with your ass.

And one more thing, you produce slick when you're aroused.

Chapter 4:

Since then, he has locked himself in a room.

The doctors rushed in shouting, but I couldn't hear anything (comma)

I couldn't stop crying, my brother was gone (punctuation)

Chapter 5:

I felt my breathing hitch and my world stop. A day... (I feel that it would be better if it was just "and my world stop". Also the "A" after the full stop is meant to be capitalised)

Our food untouched, I don't remember the time I last ate(punctuation)

It still feels so... surreal, as if I'm having a nightmare ("so" not "do" and a comma after "surreal")

He was as pale as a ghost

All other wolves covered their ears ("A" in "all" should be capitalised...cause it's after a full stop)

It was Malachi standing there, grinning from ear to ear.

Chapter 6:

I wanted to inform them beforehand, but Leo wouldn't...

It was for the best, but this time for explaining (comma was omitted)

We did that because the hunters were keeping an eye on you all, and were informing whatever that was happening to their headquaters. They were gradually gaining on us with their dirty tricks, so I pretended to be dead...(punctuation)

We caught them off guard and...

"Well we forgive you and Leo this time, but remember not to ever do this again. We are in this together, and henceforth fight our battle as one. (This fits better)

Ceol started slowly inserting his second finger, though it burned for a second, it subsided...

Mike didn't need to be prepared because...("need" not "needed")

After hearing this, Ceol thrusted his length ("thrusted" not "trusted")

He bit his collar bone lightly and then licked it to ease the sting

Kai pushed one finger in and started loosening him up for his member

Chapter 7:

I don't know where I am (not I'm)

My heart felt awfully heavy after meeting these kids (this fits better)

So we didn't have it in us ("have" not "had")

This is a time for enjoyment and celebration

So I went back to Ceol's or should I say our room. (this fitd better)

But one thing was true, even though I spent just a few hours with those babies, they are an important part of my life and I already love them. I will be waiting patiently to meet them again. (This fits better)

I didn't feel good, I think I might have caught a flu or something. So after getting out of bed, I went to look for Kai and Ceol. (This fits better)

They asked what happened and why I was in a foul mood (not I am)

General Review: Honestly I loved reading this book and I recommend it to romance fanatics, especially threesome lovers.
Remember this is a homophobe free zone, and any hateful comment would not be tolerated.
Enjoy!!
Overall rating: 8/10

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