Vampire Results
When I tell you I was surprised to receive the results a day after publishing the chapter for the judging phase. Thank you to writergirl81 and Summer_SKY_9 for all your hardwork!
Participants, if you would like to receive a copy of your scoresheets, please pm me 😊!
Judges, please tell me which book you would like me to read (your own work) ❤️
Winners, pm me if you are interested in getting an interview (it is one of your prizes which is optional).
Now let me announce the winners!
*3rd place*
Book: Vampire Wine
Author: Madame_LaBelle
Book cover/title- [6/10]
Blurb- [10/10]
Plot development-[14/15]
Character development- [8/10]
Grammar and punctuation- [5/5]
Overall enjoyment- [18/20]
Total score- [61/70]
Review: a super intriguing story. Memorizing and beautifully written. Characters seem real and are easy to fall in love with.
*2nd place*
Book: Blood Tint on a Black Rose
Author: Nefelibatas_world
Book cover and title: [10/10]
Blurb: [9/10]
Plot development: [13/15]
Character development: [8/10]
Grammar and punctuation: [5/5]
Overall enjoyment: [18/20]
Total score: [63/70]
Review: Happy to see a fan fiction of my kind under this category, 'cause usually they go under a separate category and I never really get to judge one under mine. Really liked the way you used your words in drawing beautiful, descriptive imagery; for example, the rain description in the first chapter. But at some points, you were a little straightforward in stating things than letting the tension keep your reader on the edge for a bit. Like maybe you were in an unnecessary rush or something? You may need to work on that, I suggest. By the way, nice cover. I liked it. Good Luck.
*1st place*
Book: Keen's Turn: The Vampire's Appeal
Author: MelainaBlanc
Book cover and title: [9/10]
Blurb: [10/10]
Plot development: [15/15]
Character development: [10/10]
Grammar and punctuation: [5/5]
Overall enjoyment: [18/20]
Total score: [67/70]
Review: Rich language; that's the first thing I noted about this book. The scenes were very vividly described and might I add the skillful usage of puns?. I barely have anything to complain about. Yet I would like to suggest you a cover upgrade cause you know people, no matter how hard you try to deny it, tend to judge the book by its cover. I think that will help to attract more readers to your book. Apart from that everything else about the book was rather impressive. I may even return to read the rest of the story if I get some free time in the future. Good Luck.
Congratulation to the winners!
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