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• JEON JUNGKOOK RESULTS •

thank you all so much for the participation. congratulations for your books, you are doing amazing, keep up the good work.

also thanks to the two judges Epicstorys1 and inky_jin for accepting to judge so suddenly :)

now let's see the rankings

at the 6th place


"youth" by BTdirection26

judges review.:

Cover -4/10 it's blur and not catchy

Short points - 5/10 you can make it more better.

Tittle- 8/15 it's good

First chapter- 2/5 not too intersting.

Plot- 6/20 make it's unique

Story flow- 4/10 you have to work hard on this.

Character- 3/5 not bad but make it good

Grammer vocabulary- 12/15 it's good some minor mistakes.

Connectivity- 5/10 it's okay but make it more good.

Total-( 49/100)

Judge note- i am sorry if I sound rude your story is good but still somethings are Missing like attractiveness and emotions. All the best

5th place

"the cold boy" by januisme

judges review.:

Cover- 4/10 not catch and title didn't show properly.

Short points- 7/10 kinda good but you can make it better.

Tittle- 8/15 not too attractive.

First chapter- 4/5 it's kinda good.

Plot - 8/20you can make it more attractive and better.

story flow- 5/10 it's slow make it bit fast.

Character- 2/5 not much attached.

Grammer/vocabulary- 13/15 it's good!

Connectivity- 4/10 not much but Still, you can make it's more attractive.

Total-(100/53)

Judge note- I am sorry if I sound rude. your story is good but plot is not that much attractive still you can Change it! Make your story emotional and attractive. Your story is ongoing so you still have time to change things. All the best !

4th place


"fake fiancée" by Amber_Rose4459

judges review.:

Cover: 7/10 The cover is beautiful but not related to the story, other than the fact that it has the main lead, jungkook's face on it. The fonts are pretty and everything fits well.

Blurb: 7/10 The blurb was interesting enough to keep me reading the book till the very end. Though, there are some grammar mistakes, even tense fluctuations.

Title: 14/15 The title isn't something new yet it matched the story. The title has a meaning embedded with the story.

First impression: 6/10 The start was hooking, yet there was very little emotion being a sad chapter. It didn't feel as as it should.

Plot: 14/20 The plot is good but not expressive. It was also very short that you missed many points that were actually important. The plot had many loopholes with missing emotions. You didn't give proper roles to Joey since he was the reason his sister took such a big step. You even ended the story in a rush.

Flow: 4/10 Too fast, it led to missing out important emotions and feels.

Characters: 2.5/5 Character development was fine but roles werent given properly. The rushing story blurred out things.

Grammar and punctuation: 5/15 Your grammar, vocabulary and punctuations were not so good. The grammar mistakes, including the use of emojis, were wrong according to punctuations. It felt really off.

Connectivity: 5/10 I felt the vibe, there were lack of things yet I could feel the pain.

Overall experience: Satisfied

Total: 64.5/100


now let's give a look at the first 3 places

3rd place


"living with the Bangtan Boys" by ami_gguk

judges review.:

Cover-4/10 it's common and not too attractive.

Short points- 8/10 very well written.

Title-7/15 it's common title and it's not unique

First chapter- 4/5 it's good P

lot- 15/20 well written.

Story flow-5/10 at some point it's lengthy and make readers bored.

Characters- 4/5 very well described

Grammer/ vocabulary- 13/15 pretty good

Connectivity-8/10 it's good

total (68/100)

Judge note-- i am sorry if I sound rude |your story is good and well written but it's lengthy. Your writing style is so good. You are good writer. keep going All the best



2nd place


"Euphoria" by strawberry1d

judge review.:

Cover-8/10 it's good but you can make more attractive.

Short points- 8/10 very well describe

Title-12/15 it's common title i see so many books have this tittle it's not unique but still good

First chapter- 4/5 it's good

Plot- 17/20 well write it's make reader more excited

Story flow-9/10 it's good

Characters- 4/5 very well described

Grammer/ vocabulary- 11/15 some errors still it's good

Connectivity- 8/10 it's good

total (81/100)

Judge note-- i am sorry if I sound rude * your story is good and well written but i suggest you to use less images. You are good writer. keep going All the best

and now guys let me tell you, in any other category hasn't happened that two books scored the same number of points, but since it happened here... I believe they both deserve this first place

winners of the 1st place are


"how I became a serial killer" by Crazy_Exotic_Army

Judge review.:

Cover: 7/10 The cover is aesthetic, giving vibes of blood and death but honestly while reading a fanfiction, the face of the main protagonist(s) allures readers more.

Blurb: 9/10 The blurb was interesting enough to keep me reading the book till the edge. I love how you said everything yet kept the story hidden beneath the covers, and the mystery is kept intact.

Title: 14/15 The title isn't something fancy but I don't know what else would have been a better title if not this!

First impression: 9/10 I enjoyed the start. It showed how well the society sees a serial killer, a psychopath. It felt like the author had been in a situation like officer Taehyung. The shivers and the little fear, and the whole attitude of our killer was really impressive.

Plot: 20/20 This story has something serious going on, from how a killer functions to how to catch one, I am flabbergasted. I don't know what to say anymore.

Flow: 10/10 Perfect.

Characters: 5/5 Like, I love Jeonguk as much as I love tae, a bit more for Jeongguk.

Grammar and punctuation: 15/15 Amazing.

Connectivity: 10/10 I felt the vibe, I sill can.

Overall experience: Could you please update more? I am hooked.

Total: 94/100


"for you" by Niannez01

Judge review.:

Cover: 8/10 The cover is nice and clean but doesn't fit the story you have written.

Blurb: 8/10 The blurb seemed dense, except from a few lines from the story nothing else was there. Blurbs are supposed to be a small trailer telling the story in small. Yet it held a certain suspense. But, you should work on it!

Title: 10/10 I had scored you less, but once I finished reading the beauty, I came back and edited the marks. The title couldn't have been better

first impression : 10/10 The first chapter held so much power to it, I wanted to know more. Who the protagonist was and what was happening? It really took my mind to it.

Plot: 20/20 The plot is really different from the ones I have read till now, and I have to say that I couldn't find your book earlier. The sweet and sour interactions between Ara and Jk keeps my heart! Count me in dear, I will be reading you books and keep reading!

Flow: 9/10 All fine.

Character: 5/5 Well, Ara or Mira, what ever I call her, I shall feel her to be me, always. Jungkook, I feel hurt when he felt it. It was a roller-coaster of a ride. The 7 members made me happy, made me cry. Ah!

Grammar and Vocabulary : 14/15 I saw a tiny bit of mistakes here and there. Proofread!

Connectivity: 10/10 I so love this story my god! You are really creative dear, and so is your writing style. Amazing!

total.: 94/100

You deserve to have a place!


congratulations everyone for the hard work :)♡

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