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The story begins from the scene when sumo nd Shravan did marriage in court...

Sumo left for Tiwari Killa nd Shravan went for attending a meeting...

At Tiwari killa...

Sumo is waiting for shravan. He was yet to come. She started feeling uncomfortable . Sumo gets a feel that something bad is going to happen...
...mujhe itna Ajeeb kyu feel ho Raha hain...

Sumo Pushkar Ko call Karti hain...

Pushkar- hello sumo...kya hua tujhe... tu itna sad tone me baat kyu kar Rahi hain...

Sumo- Pushkar sharvan kaha hain..mujhe bahut tension ho Rahi h uski ....tu plzz pata kar naaa...kaha h wo....usne tumhe bataya ...ki wo kaha gya hain? Mujhe ajeeb si bechaini ho rahi hai.

Puskar- sumooo...sumooo relax meri Jaan....bhaiya to 3 hours phele hi Tiwari Killa ke liye chale Gaye....par usse phele unhe ek meeting ke liye Jaana..tha...

Sumo- 3 hours ho Gaye hain...Pushkar ...Shravan ab tak yaha kyu nahi aaya....

Dekh Pushkar mujhe bahut ghabraahat ho rahi hain....
Tu ek kaam kar...Shravan hamesha apna phone ka GPS on rakhta hain...tu waha se pata kar naaa...kaha h wooo...
plzz Pushkar... Mera dil keh raha hai ki kuch theek nahi hai.

Pushkar- Chalo atlast apni dil ki sunne lag gyi ho tum... (mocking her)

Sumo- Pushkarrrr pleaseeee.

Shravan- Relax sumo....relax....mai dekta hoon ki bhaiya kaha hain.....aur tu itna tensed kyu ho Rahi hai...koi baat hain kya ...

Sumo flashback ....
Sumo phone rings ..
Sumo- hello....kon bol Raha hai...

Aditya- kya baat h miss Suman Tiwari ...naaa naaaa Suman Tiwari nahi....Mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra ....
Mujhe itni jaldi bhool gayii...

Tum to bahut fast nikli yaar...mujse shaddi karne ka natak Kiya ...aur pyar kisi aur se...huhhhh...
...jab Maine tumhe chhune ki koshish ki to tum aise sharmayi jaise tumhe kisi ne pheli Baar touch Kiya hoo...
Par Shravan ke saath to shadi se pehle hii tumne honeymoon bhi mana liya...not bad...Mrs. Malhotra .... Badi fastforward kisam ki ho....

Sumo- Just shut up Aditya ...just shut up...ab ek aur shabd nahi....
Mujhe ye tumhe batane ki jarurat nahi ki mai kya hoon kya nahii ...
Aur Haan....Karti hoon main shravan se pyar...aaj se nahi bachpan se Karti hoon...
Jab se pyar Ko samjha hai tab se sirf aur sirf Shravan se hi pyaar kiya hai......

Aur Haan mera Shravan tumse  kahi Guna behtar hain....to shut your filthy mouth ...
Kyuki tum jaise ghatiya soch wale Insaan se main baat karna to dur  shakal dekhna bhi pasand nahi karungii....

Aditya- itna gussa theek nahi Mrs. Malhotra ...
Sharvan ne mere saath ye theek nahi kiya .  Iski keemat to use chukani padegi ...
Bacha sakti ho to bacha lo apne so cold pati paramsher Ko.....

Ur time start now...

He laughs like evil
Nd calls ends......

Sumo starts crying ...nd thinks ki wo ab kya kare....

Flashback ends...

Pushkar on the phone...

Sumoo sumooo to sun Rahi hai naaa.....kaha kho gyii .... Come on, bhaiyaa ke khayalo me itna bhi mat kho jaya karo meri pujya bhabhiji... (trying to bring smile on her face)

Sumo- Haan...Haaan ..main sun rahi hoo ...

Bus tu mujhe jaldi se sharvan ke GPS se pata karke bta ki wo kaha hain....

Aur Haan Pushkar ...Aditya ka bhii plzzz pata karke btao ki kaha hai woo...plzzz...

Pushkar- ok ..ok m Abhi pata karke btata hoon....tum tension mat loo...I'm always with u......

Sumo talk to herself...
Shravan kaha ho yaar tummm.....
Plzzz yaar jaldi aa jao na....Apni biwi se itna intezaar mat karao. Ab aur intezaar nahi hota mujse....plzzzz ..

Sumo folds hands nd prayer to God....
Plzzz bhagwaanji mere shravan ki rakhsha karna..use kuch mat hone Dena...plzzz...
Agar use kuch hua too ...to main uske Bina jee nahi paungii ... Pagal ho jaongi mai...
Plzzz bhagwaanji mere shravan ki raksha karna....

"Meri har Chahat tujse hain ..
Meri har Mannat mein tu hain...
Tu hi mera khuda hain...tu hi humnava hain...
Tujhse hi to mera raabta hain..."

After sometime sumo phone rings....

Sumo- Haan Pushkar bol....
Pata chala kya ...ki kaha hain Shravan....

Pushkar- Haan...wo sumo..wo....
Sumooo...

Sumo- kya wooo wooo Laga Rakha h Pushkar....
Jaldi bta naa...Shravan kaha hain...

Pushkar- woo wooo Shravan Ko Aditya ne kidnap kar Liya hai...Maine jab bhaiya ke phone pe Kiya too Aditya ne uthya ..aur usne bola...ki bol de tere favourite sumo bhabhi ko...agar bacha sakti hai to bacha le Apne sharvan Ko....uske pass ek ghanta hain....ur time start now...

But tu tension mat le.. Maine uska call record kar Liya hain... Aur ye bhi pata chal Gaya hai usne bhaiya Ko kaha Rakha hain....

Aur maine police Ko bhi inform kar diya hain...

Sumo- sun tune ramnath uncle Ko bataya ........ki Aditya ne Shravan Ko kidnapp kar Liya hai?....

Pushkar - Abhi tak nahi btaya ...bus Abhi btane ja Raha hoon....

Sumo- theek hain...par meri baat Dhyan sun....Maine Nirmala aunty ko phone Karti hoon....aur unhe unke so cold bete ke baare mein batati hoon....
Tum mujhe wo address bata jaha Aditya ne Shravan Ko Rakha hain....

Pushkar- Haan...sun....usne naaa bhaiya Koo...railway station ke pass jo godowns h naaa...waha pe Rakha hain....purani Delhi wale stations ke pass hai jooo...wahi pe....

Sumo- theek hai Pushkar...main waha pahuchti hoon...tum bhi waha pahucho......aaj is Aditya ki to main oh my mata Karti kar dungi...khud ka bada hero samjta h naaaa...saala suwar ...hain kya wo ...na shakal na akal hain..aaya bada  langoor Kahikaaa....😎😎😎.(sumo in full on sumo mood)...

After one hour....

Adtiya- kya hua Shravan...........
Ab bol kyu nahi rahe kuch ...
Oh bologe kaise ...tumhari wo so cold best friend suman Tiwari ...areeee naaa naaaa....Suman sharvan Malhotra ...jo yaha nahi hain...
...aur tumhari aukat bhi nahi kuch bolne ki.....

Tum Suman ke pati kehlane ke layak  hi nahi ho.....areeee pati kya best friend kehlane ke layak bhi nahi hoo kyuki tumne use se shadii
apni hawas ki aag bujhane ke liyee......

Shravan- Shut up..just shut up... Ab ek shabd bhi apne muh se nikala saale to mai tera muh tod dunga......mujhe nahi pata tha teri soch itni giri huii hain....
Kitna kameena hai tuuuu ...
Acha hua tera asli chehra sabke saamne aa gya ..Accha hua jo teri shadi nahi huyi usse...warna meri Suman ki zindagi tu barbaad kar deta.....

Aditya- ...ohhhh ...meri Suman....not bad ...Haan....
To mr.malhotra Ko bolna bhi aata hain.....

Shravan- ...tu mere hath khol de ek Baar ...mujhe Marana bhi bahut acha aata hain....tu bus ek Baar khol de mere hath ...phir main tujhe batata hoon..ki m kya kya kar sakta hoon....

Aditya- ..noooooo noooooo ..main Aisa bilkul nahi karungaa... Mai tujhe tadpa tadpa ke maarunga...taki teri wo so cold characterless biwi teri halat dekh ke khud bhi mar jaaye .....

Oh ek baat yaad aaya ..waise Kamal ki ladki hai naa Suman Tiwari .....phele mujh jaise paise wale Insaan se shadi karne ke liye taiyar ho gyi...shadi tute Ko 2 din bhi nahi huee.. aur dekho tum se bhi shadi kar lii ...tum bhi to paise wale hooo...kitni lalachi auarat h naaa Suman.....

Thudddddd....

A slap on aditya face .... Aditya lifts up his face to sees the one who dared to slap him.

...just shut up ....tum hote kaun ho mujhe ye sab bolne wale...
Acha huaaa tumne apna rang us din dikha diya ..warna...tumhara ye rang bhi dekhne Ko nahi milta ......

Don't you dare to talk about me like this...
Warna tumhara kya haal karungi tum soch bhi nahi sakte ....

Nirmala aunty bhi aati hogi ...wo bhi to dekhle Zara unke laadle bete aditiya ne kya Gul khilaya hain.....

Wo to bol Rahi thi ...meri parviash ho tum...kaisi parviash ki hai unhone tumhari aaj pta chal gya...

Aditya- You.... tumhari himmaat kaise huii meri maa ke baare main aise baat karne ki ....

Suman- kyuuu Bura Laga ....mere bare mein bol sakte hoo...Lekin apni maa ke barre mein sun nahi sakte ...kyuuu...kyuki wo tumhari maa hain isliye ...aur main Suman ...kyu main ek aurat nahi hoon....kyu main ek Insaan nahi hoon....kyu mere seene mein Dil nahi hain...kyu...kyuuuu...

Hai koi jawab nahi naaa...
Main deti hoon jawab tumhe ...

Tumne mujhe naa to kabhi pyar Kiya aur naaa hi dost samja ...
Tumne mujhe sirf ek khilona Samaja....pata hain ..kon SAA....

Sirf apni bhook mitane wala khilona...
Kyu such kadwa Laga.....

Agar tum such mein mujhe pyar karte naaa to jo Shravan ne tumhe bola uska tum Vishwas nahi karte ....tum baat ki jaanch padtal karte ..Aisa hain bhi yaa nahii...

Par tumne to use hii such maana...aur mere saath jabardasti karne ki koshish ki ...kyu....
Sirf ye dekhne ke liye ..ki main agar Shravan ke saath shadi se pehle so sakti hoon ..to tumhari sath bhi so jaungi ...
Agar Aisa ho gya to main shadi se inkaar kar dunga..aur ek ilzam Laga Dunga Suman par ki she is characterless...
Kyuuuu...yahi socha tha na tumne....

Kya hua koi jawab nahi hain tumhare passs....
Hoga bhi kaise....tumhari sacchai jo samne aa gyi hain....

Aditya- tumhe ye sab kaise pata ...ki Shravan ne mujhe ye sab kaha ....

Suman- ise se koi farak nahi padta ki usne mujhe kab kaha..aur kaise kaha...farak is baat se padta hain..ki tum kitni giri hui soch rakhte ho... Kitne ghatiya Insaan ho tum....

Mujhe Shravan ne mana Kiya tha ki tum ache Insaan nahi hoo...
Tumhari niyat achi nahi hain....
Tumhari soch kitni Giri hui hain...
Par Maine uski baat nahi maanii....

Us din jab Preeti aur Pushkar ki shadi ke Baad tumne meri aur tumhari shadi ka ailaan Kiya ..tab bhi shravan ne mujhe bahut samjhaya ...par Maine uski baat nahi suniii...
Kyuki mujhe nanu ki izzat pyari thiii....

Mai tumhari intention usi din samaj gyi thi jab tumne mujhe jhooth bol ke wo dress dilaya...

Tumhara wo mujhe touch karna...tumhara wo ghoor ghoor ke dekhna... But Maine ignore Kiya...kyuki Preeti ki shadi ka sawal tha...isliyeee....

Phir tumne Nirmala aunty ko bataya .. Tabhi nanu ki tabiyat bigad gyii...aur nanu ne mujhe bola ki wo tab apna treatment start nahi karenge jab tak main tumhe shadi ke liye Haan naa keh doon....

Tumne to apni baat bol di...
Kya tumne mujse pucha ki main kya chahti hoon...meri shadi hain ...Usme tumne meri marji bhi nahi puchiii...

Sirf tumhri wajah se ..kyukiii tum aur tumhari maaa ne soch Liya ki mujse jyada achi ladki to mere so cold bete ko mil nahi sktiii...

Kyu...yahi such h naaa...

Aur haann...Rahi Shravan ki wo baat ...wo sirf isliye ki wo mujhe ye ehsaas karwa sake ki tum kitne ghatiya Insaan hoo.....
Haan manti hoon...Shravan ka tarika galat tha..but usne mera Bhala socha ...mere bare mein socha......kyuki main uski best friend jo hoon.....
Apni bestfriend Ko aise kese kisi bhi Insaan ke saath Jaane deta....

Aur Haan...ab main shravan ki biwi hoon....aur main Shravan se bahot pyar Karti hoon....
.agar mere pati Ko tumne hath bhi lagane ki koshish bhii ki na to mai bhul jaungi ki tum Nirmala aunty ke bete ho....

Mere Shravan ke aass pass bhi mat bhatakana...

Aur ek aakhri baat ....tumne jo ye sab bola ye sab police aur tumhari maaa ne bhi Suna hai....

Shravan is shocked ..to listen those words and talks to himself ...
main kyu nahi samaj saka...
Ki tum meri sumooo.....jo mujhse bahut pyar Karti Hain...
Jo kuch bhi ho chahe par mera sath kabhi nahi chodegii.. kyu nahi samaj saka main..kyuuu....

Aur meri sumo ne nannu ke kehne pe ye sab Kiya.....
Meri sumooo shadi nahi karna chahti thi ..Aditya se....
..meri sumo ne kitna Saha hain...

Nirmala enter full of anger ...nd she slaps Aditya ....
....
Aditya - ..maaa ap meri baat to suno...Maine kuch nahi Kiya .......
Shravan ne ye sab karne ke liye mujhe majboor Kiya ....

Nirmala- ...chup ...ek dum chup....ek shabd aur nahi ......
Tune ye sila diya meri parvarish ka....ye Sanskar to nahi diye the Maine tujhe....
Ye to nahi sikhya Maine tujhe .....
Aaj tune meri Mamta Ko sharamsar kar diya . Sabit kar diya tune ki paraya khoon humesha paraya hi hota hai..

Ek bete se main mil nahi sakti thi...us bete se mujhe alag kar diya gya tha..aur tumne mere us bete ko kidnap karke meri parvarish ko aur mujhe gunhegaar sabit kar diya ...
Sabit kar diya tumne ...ki main ek achi maa nahi ban skiii .....sabit kar diya tumne...

Aditya - maaa....pls..aap Aisa mat bolo...

Nirmala- ...mat bolo mujhe maaa....main tumhari maa nahi ...maa Hoti to tum ye sab auchi harkat nahi karte wo bhi mere apne khoon ke sath......

Aaj tumne mera sar sharam se jhuka diya ...jhuka diya...

Sumo- ... clapping karte hueee....wowwww aunty ...kya baat boli Apne.....
...ap such mein ek achi maa sabit nahi huiii....
As a women mein apki bahut respect Karti hoon...par yaha ap galat hoo...

Agar ye awaz 11 saal phele Aapne apne aur Apne bete ke liye uthayi Hoti to aaj ap dono sath mein hote ....
Aap Apne bete ke liye ladti . Par nahi, uncle ne bol diya to aap use chod ke Chali gyiii ....kyuuuu...
..sirf isliye ki aap use dukhi nahi dekh skti thi...ya phir aap uski wo parvarish nahi kar sakti thi...jo uncle ne kii...

Aunty ap chahti to court ja sakti thiii ...Apne bete ke liye ladti lekin nahii ..
Ap ek independent women thi naaa...infact abhi bhi ho na.....to kya aap Apne bete ki parvarish nahi kar pati ...kya ap wo education nahi de pati .. bolooo....

Koi jawab nahi hai naaa...apke pass....

Apne bahut easy way chuna ...Apne problems se bhagne kaaa....

Ap uncle aur Shravan Ko chod ke Chali gyiii ...hamesha hamesha ke liye...
..ek Baar ye bhi nahi socha ...ki Shravan kaise rahega apke Bina...

11 saal Apne use se baat karne ki koshish nahi kiii ....

Nirmala- (rote huye)...Aisa nahi hai Suman beta ...Maine bahut koshish ki.....
Main Shravan se Milne bhi gyi thi...par ram ne mujhe Milne nahi diya ..aur bola ki agar Maine unse Shravan Ko chhinne ki koshish ki to ...to wo meri court mein insult karenge .....
Main Shravan Ko court ke chakkaro mein nahi le Jana chahti thi....isliye bus main Chali gyii ...

Suman - ...wahhh aunty .. Kya explanation diya hai aapne..Once again aapke liye to talliya bajani chahiye...

Ap Apne bete ke liye Apne pati se ladd nahi payi...
Unhone dhamki di ..aur aap bus Chali gyiii... Kaisi maa thi aap?

...aunty ap uncle se baat Karti ...
Apna pov rakhti ...unhe convince karne ki koshish Karti ....
Nahiiii aap Aisa kyu Karti ...apki so cold self respect apki ego beechme aa jati naa....

Then ramnath enters ...

Suman-...Aayiye Aayiye ..uncle ap bhi aaiye ...
Aapki hi kami thiii...
Kya hua shock Laga ...Apne bete ki aisi halat dekh ke ...
Ya phir mujhe yaha dekh ke aapko gussa aa Raha hai ....
..
Ramnath- ..Suman ...ye tum kya bakwas kar Rahi hooo....

Suman - ohhh uncle ...acha to main bakwas kar Rahi hoon....
Bahut khoob ...

Uncle main aapse request Karti hoon...ap Shravan Ko such Bata dijiye ...Abhi bhi waqt hain.....Kahi der nhi ho jaye .....

Ap dono ne Apne ego ...apni jhooti self respect ke chalte ...Shravan ka bachpan to kharab kar hi diya hai ...atleast ab use uski aage ki life ache se jeene dijiye ...

Auraton ke prati uske Mann mein jo nafrat hai na use sirf aap dur kar sakte ho uncle.. sirf aap..

Aapke us bole gye jooth ki wajah se aaj mera Shravan kadwa aur aurton ke prati galat soch rakhne wala ban Gaya hain...

Wo Vishwas hi nahi karta kisi bhi  aurat par ..
Mujh par bhi Vishwas nahii karta ..
Use lagta hai sab aurate uski maa jaise Ziddi, matlabi, aur self respect ka dhong karne wali Hoti hai...

Par ap to jante hai naa...sab ek jaise nahi hote ...

Ramnath looks down feeling guilty for his actions. Somewhere he knows he is to be blamed for Shravan's current condition. Suman continues...

Pata hai uncle Shravan aap dono ki wajah se Aisa bana hain..
Aap dono us waqt chahte to Aisa kuch nahi hota ...ap apni male ego aur aunty ap apni self respect mein itna  andhe ho Gaye ki aap ye nhi dekh paye ki...
Shravan par uska kya asar ho Raha hai. 
Ap dono ne Apne Apne baare mein socha ...
Kya ek Baar ke liye bhi kisine ye socha ki Shravan kya chahta hai.....
Use kiske sath Rehna hain....apne pita ke saath ya phir apni maa ke saath ...

Wo maa jiska chehra dekh kar uska din shuru hota t...
Wo chehra jise dekhe Bina use neend nhii aati thi...
Wo pita jise se wo apna school ki, dosto ki har chhoti se chhoti baate share karta tha...

Kya aapne Shravan se pucha ki usko kiske sath Rehna hain? .

Bus Apne use ek faisla suna diya ki aaj se Shravan Apne baap ke paas rahega ..  kyuki wo uske pita hai ...
Kyu maa kaha gyii ...uska koi Haqq nahiii ?...

Bus use aap dono ne khud se alag kar diya ...
..
Uncle maa papa na hone ka ehsaas kya hota hai ...ye mujse better koi nahi samj skta ....

Aaj main aap dono Ko ye sab isliye bol Rahi ...kyuki aaj aapko ek aur mouka mil Raha hai ap phir se teeno ek sath reh Sako ...jo waqt beet Gaya hum use Badal nhi sakte...par hum aane wale waqt Ko khushnuma to bana skte hain...

Uncle aap hi sab theek kar skte hoo....
Warna kuch log to aise hote hain..jinhe ye waqt nhi milta aur na hi maa baap..

Baki apki marji ...
 
Mujhe jo kehna tha main keh diya ..aage apki marji...

Shravan was shocked to listen these confeession...nd surprised to sees the guilty look on his parents face........

"Khamosh ho gya main ye dekh..
  Mere apno ne hi mujhe daga kiya...
Kya shikayat Karu unse .....
Jinhone Apne faiyde ke liye hi...
Mujhe use kiya...
Hain guzarish us khuda se ...
Aisa koi apna to kya paraya bhi na kare....
Kyuki jab Dard hota hai naa....
Tab Dard nassor ban jata hain.."

To be countieded.....

Helloooooooooo my dears....
How r u all....

Here is the first part of Khamoshiyan.....

Likhne to hum os baithe the...Magar ye TS mein likha gya ....😂😂😂😂

Ab likh diya hain...pata nahi kya likha hain....

Jaisa bhi likha hain.....ab ap sab Ko pata ki kaisa likha hain...
Maine to likh diya ....

I know isme bahut mistake hongi ... grammatical error bhi hoga.. to bare with me....😂😉😉

With love...
Bhavi.....