Masquerade by Dazzlingbyeol

Title: I love the title. Totally fits the plot. 

Cover: I love the cover too. It sets the mood just right and makes me look forward to a love triangle ahead.

Description/summary: The description is nice. It makes me curious and draws me in to read the story. It also promises a plot ahead with lots to look forward to.

Plot: The plot has potential. The main characters are their own person and their actions are backed up with reasoning.

Grammar and Punctuation: There are grammatical and spelling mistakes. The good thing is they won't make reader get confused about what is going on. I don't want to point out tiny ones as they could be a typo. The most common mistake I saw was of tenses.

For example, you wrote: ...she still hasn't wake up
It should be: ...she still hasn't woken up.

I'm not sure why you end a lot of dialogues with a comma, so I'd suggest you read about usage of punctuation. Also, using commas and semi-colons in your long sentences will make your writing better. Since, you are not a native English speaker, I want to appreciate your efforts. Even if there are mistakes, they don't put me off your story. Keep going!

Overall feel and flow of book: The pace of this book is so right. I didn't feel like anything is being rushed. It is well proportioned. The characters didn't feel too made up or unreal. As a writer, always try to avoid being too cliché, like starting a book with the protagonist waking up, because some readers might be put off by that. But, I'll let you off as it was well written. The story flows smoothly. I was able to empathize with the protagonist and loved your descriptive way of writing. Overall, this book is like reading a k-drama and I enjoyed it very much.

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Dazzlingbyeol I hope you found this review useful. Feel free to reach me if you have any queries. Please don't be discouraged, if it isn't what you were expecting. Keep writing! 💜💜

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