Man in Black by minXXshuga

Title: The title is nice, but when combined with the line on the cover it becomes more interesting.

Cover: I love the cover! The picture of Yoongi and the font of the title is so good.

Description/summary: I like the description, especially the last line, it got me all excited. It's just the right size and tells exactly what readers are going to find inside. The grammar isn't wrong, but the starting of both paragraphs is awkward.

You wrote - "Park Soomi, she found herself caught in the middle...". Here, the comma and 'she' is of no use. It could be: "Park Soomi found herself caught in the middle..." or if you want to make it more interesting you can add a relevant detail about the main character. For example, "Park Soomi, a passionate music producer, found herself caught in...". In second paragraph also the beginning could be better worded. 

Plot: There is a strong plot and characters. I liked how it is progressing. The characters are natural. I could see their behaviors were backed up with reasoning which is good.

Grammar and Punctuation: Your English is good. I didn't see grammatical mistakes, so nothing to point in that area.

Overall feel and flow of book: I could go on and on about how much I enjoyed reading this book. I just love the way it's written, from chapter titles to dialogues and description. The story flows smoothly. Even though the book begins with a dream, (which is a cliche) it didn't put me off, because it was so well-written. The way main characters were slowly opening up and getting comfortable with each other was nice. Although, I'd love to get more insight on the investigation part too (Maybe, it's there later on). Overall, this book is a gem. I read about ten-eleven chapters and will keep reading further. There is a mystery, romance, drama and creepy dreams. I'd definitely recommend it.

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minXXshuga Hope you find this review useful. There wasn't really much to point out. I loved your way of writing and hope your book gets more recognition. It definitely deserves it! Feel free to reach out to me if you have any questions about the review. Keep writing! 💜

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