𝓣𝓲𝓶𝓮 𝓽𝓸 𝓾𝓷𝓿𝓮𝓲𝓵 𝓽𝓱𝓮 𝔀𝓲𝓷𝓷𝓮𝓻 !!

𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐖𝐈𝐍𝐍𝐄𝐑

Book: Canvas of Deception

Author: @EclipseNoir123

Judge: @Hells07dealer

Score: 28/30

Grammar and Punctuation: 5/5

The prologue is beautifully written, with no grammatical or punctuation errors.

Engagement and Hook: 4.5/5

The prologue is very interesting, engaging, and intriguing. It is so well-written, and the emotions evoked are incredibly raw.

Character Introduction: 4/5

The prologue introduces our main character very effectively. Although the name is not revealed, it expertly conveys the character's most important attributes.

Tone and Atmosphere: 5/5

The tone and atmosphere of the story align perfectly with the overall theme. The dark and serene vibe is truly mind-blowing.

Plot Significance: 4.5/5

The prologue is crucial to the main plot, revealing key points that intrigue the reader and encourage continued reading.

Originality and Creativity: 5/5

The story is exceptionally creative and undeniably original

TOTAL: 28/30

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𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐑𝐔𝐍𝐍𝐄𝐑 𝐔𝐏

Book: Sacrificed love

Author: @guxixthv

Judge: @Hells07dealer

Score: 26.5/30

Grammar and Punctuation: 5/5

The story has good grammar and vocabulary. There are no grammatical or punctuation errors which is an important part of the story.

Engagement and Hook: 5/5

The prologue is really interesting; I don't know if the grandma and little boy are part of the main story or not, however the concept is very interesting and real. The narration done through a third person rather than the author really enhanced the story.

Character Introduction: 3/5

The prologue did give insight into the story, main plot, and connection between the leads, but didn't really reveal anything significant about the story.

Tone and Atmosphere: 5/5

The tone and atmosphere were very well conveyed through the words. The narration made it clear that the story is a blend of love and tragedy.

Plot Significance: 3.5/5

If you decide to use the little boy or grandma in the real story later, then the plot can be really significant.

Originality and Creativity: 5/5

The story is very creative and original, as I know of, considering I have read a lot of vampire-based stories but not a prologue like this. So, I am really interested this time.

Total: 26.5/30

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𝓒𝓞𝓝𝓖𝓡𝓐𝓣𝓤𝓛𝓐𝓣𝓘𝓞𝓝𝓢!

Note: The scoresheets of other participants will be out soon!