🏆Mini Awards - Entry 2- Best Prologue Results🏆
🎉Congratulations to all the producers in the PROOF MINI Awards.
The results will be from 6th - 1st place.
PRIZE FOR ONLY 1ST PLACE AND RUNNER UP
Critic ViniShah2 and MiniiMini
YOUR PRIZES
FOR THE CRITICS/Judges
⚜ Certificate
⚜ Follow from any two hosts-you not already followed
⚜ Aesthetics of your choice (optional- cover/banner-
mood boards for a book of your choice -
⚜ Reads and glowing stars for a book of your choice. ( Indicate book )
PRODUCER RESULTS
6TH PLACE
. The newborn: iMeGiNeSoN 5.5/15
The grammar and syntax were severely lacking. I guess it's due to English not being the author's first language. I suggest they use something like Grammarly. It will help the story become coherent. I could not grasp what was going on in one read, which is a fatal mistake for a prologue. Your prologue is what will attract or repel readers, and in this case, it confuses the heck out of them. But that doesn't mean your idea was bad, on the contrary, it was a lovely idea for a prologue, perhaps even the best one. But the inconsistencies in tense usage and lack of appropriate grammar do not let the picture of what's going on set in.
5TH PLACE
3. Love in jeopardy Armyxbts_oneheart : 6.5/15
These points are more for correct format than they are for actual writing. The word choice, tone, and sentence formation could all be better. It is awkward and makes it difficult to truly get immersed in the story. The syntax was lacking but there were only minute grammatical errors which made the piece easier to go through. This was the most correctly formatted prologue, kudos to the author for that. It could use a revamp; as the deciding factor of whether or not the reader delves further into the story of not, the prologue should be extremely strong.
4TH PLACE
2. Maldito Diablo: Sugakookie-nd-tae 7/15
This was not a prologue. It was a teaser like an author has tagged it in their book. A prologue is written in the same style as the story and is not a collection of quotes/introduction of characters. But, it was intriguing and invoked curiosity to know what happens in the book, thus, the points are given. Although it has its fair share of grammatical errors and the dialogues are awkward and even made me cringe at points. I suggest that the author does something to beta read/edit their story. Using stuff like Grammarly is a good way to start.
3RD PLACE
Once upon our love by Nefelibatas_world : 11.5/15
Review: The prologue was beautifully described but it was too long for a prologue. I don't really prefer that long prologue.
AND ... THE WINNERS...
🎉CONGRATULATIONS🎉
🥈RUNNER UP-SECOND PRIZE 🥈
Indebted by Kalapika1 : 12.5/15
Review: Beautifully written. There were punctuation marks missing in a few places, but other than that, everything was fine.
RUNNER UP- YOUR PRIZE
⚜ Follow from @ThaiSenpai
⚜ Aesthetics for your chosen winning category ( banner/ cover optional)
⚜ Reads and Stars for your winning book as well as comments on the winning chapters
⚜ Book added to "PROOF MINI AWARD RUNNER-UP"
⚜Sticker
🥇 FIRST PLACE🥇
Let me down slowly by Score: Fxllen-Soldier_Hwa 13/15
Review: That was exciting. I felt the urge to jump to the first chapter. Just check the punctuation marks once.
FIRST PLACE- YOUR PRIZE
⚜ Follow from the three HOSTS
⚜ Aesthetics for your chosen winning category.
cover / banner
character mood board-optional)
⚜ Reads and Stars for your winning book ( MAIN ACCOUNT) as well as comments on the winning chapters- for chapter scenes categories
⚜ Book added to "PROOF MINI AWARD WINNER"
⚜ Sticker and Certificate
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