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🏆Mini Awards - Entry 2- Best First line Results🏆


🎉Congratulations to all the producers in the PROOF MINI Awards.

The results will be from 5th - 1st place.

PRIZE FOR ONLY 1ST PLACE AND RUNNER UP


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Critic CoolJAROCKS

YOUR PRIZES

FOR THE CRITICS/Judges

⚜ Certificate

⚜ Follow from any two hosts-you not already followed

⚜ Aesthetics of your choice (optional- cover/banner-

mood boards for a book of your choice -

⚜ Reads and glowing stars for a book of your choice. ( Indicate book )


PRODUCER RESULTS

5TH PLACE

The String of Fates (MYG):midnight_breezee  6/10

 Very interesting, especially the glimpse that Yoongi is in disguise, but it is a bit flat and intensely direct. Rather describe the disguise of Yoongi without mentioning it immediately. For example, 'Pale skin was adorned with wrinkles as it was indented around dark mysterious eyes that resembled that of a feline', something along those lines, which will hook readers, but don't overdo it

4TH PLACE

'Cinderella:MiniiMini  6.5/10

 I loved the descriptive opening. However, it is a bit cliche to describe the sun's rays. Perhaps you could attempt by starting with sound or even touch.

3RD PLACE

Let Me Down Slowly Fxllen-Soldier_Hwa: 7/10

The soft intensity is gripping, but it's too short. Perhaps lengthen the sentence but keep the engagement, but don't make it too long, which can cause disinterest in readers.


AND ... THE WINNERS...

🎉CONGRATULATIONS🎉

🥈RUNNER UP-SECOND PRIZE 🥈

They Skedaddled:SongYeEun2500 7.5/10

I love the flow of how you described the classroom without having to use the word classroom, although the opening sentence is too long. Instead, shorten it but keep the intense learning atmosphere of the two characters in the classroom


RUNNER UP- YOUR PRIZE

⚜ Follow from @ThaiSenpai

⚜ Aesthetics for your chosen winning category ( banner/ cover optional)

⚜ Reads and Stars for your winning book as well as comments on the winning chapters

⚜ Book added to "PROOF MINI AWARD RUNNER-UP"

⚜Sticker


🥇 FIRST PLACE🥇

HUSHED LITTLE SECRETS: thursdxychild 8/10

Wow, I love it. It is a bit too short, but the information from that one-liner already gripped me. Great job.


FIRST PLACE- YOUR PRIZE

⚜ Follow from the three HOSTS

⚜ Aesthetics for your chosen winning category.

cover / banner

character mood board-optional)

⚜ Reads and Stars for your winning book ( MAIN ACCOUNT) as well as comments on the winning chapters- for chapter scenes categories

⚜ Book added to "PROOF MINI AWARD WINNER"

⚜ Sticker and Certificate




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