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Short Story Results

First of all, I would like to say congratulations to every single one of the participants. Putting yourself out there is not easy, and I commend you for it. I would also like to give one last shoutout DauntlessShadowIce1  to happysnowfeet and for their incredible work. I genuinely cannot thank them enough.

Now, the moment you've been waiting for.

I am posting everyone's breakdown (averaged from the two judges). The winner of the genre will get a review, which can also be DM'd to the author upon request. Participants, a few of you might be DM'd some advice from your judges. If not, you still have the option to request some additional comments. Winners, please DM me your email so I can send the stickers over. Judges, please follow the winner of your genre.

And now, it is my privilege to announce the results for short story for Season 2 of the Borderverse Awards.

10. Malaysian Tales - Uncle Rami by CT-2103 -2103
Cover/Title: 5.375/10
Blurb: 3.5/5
Grammar: 14/20
Plot: 15.5/20
Characters: 15/20
Style: 19/20
Personal: 3/5
Total: 75.375/100

9. Unknown Number by Shivkuti_Live
Cover/Title: 7.5/10
Blurb: 3.5/5
Grammar: 17/20
Plot: 16.5/20
Characters: 17/20
Style: 17.5/20
Personal: 3/5
Total: 82/100

8. Sated by LynaForge
Cover/Title: 9/10
Blurb: 3.5/5
Grammar: 18/20
Plot: 17/20
Characters: 15.5/20
Style: 18.5/20
Personal: 3.5/5
Total: 85/100

7. Everday is Unmatched, Unique, and a Beauty by Baqkns
Cover/Title: 7/10
Blurb: 4.5/5
Grammar: 16.5/20
Plot: 18/20
Characters: 19/20
Style: 17.5/20
Personal: 3/5
Total: 85.5/100

6. MUHARABA by idgafology
Cover/Title: 8.375/10
Blurb: 4/5
Grammar: 18.5/20
Plot: 16.5/20
Characters: 18.5/20
Style: 17.5/20
Personal: 3/5
Total: 86.375/100

5. When the Daylight Has Faded by mellimack
Cover/Title: 8.25/10
Blurb: 4.75/5
Grammar: 17.5/20
Plot: 19/20
Characters: 18/20
Style: 17/20
Personal: 3.5/5
Total: 88/100

4. Timeless by kakolilaha6
Cover/Title: 8.5/10
Blurb: 4.75/5
Grammar: 17/20
Plot: 17.5/20
Characters: 20/20
Style: 17.5/20
Personal: 3/5
Total: 88.25/100

3. Fate Finds Destiny by EastCoastPinay
Cover/Title: 9.25/10
Blurb: 4.25/5
Grammar: 18.5/20
Plot: 18/20
Characters: 18.5/20
Style: 19/20
Personal: 3.5/5
Total: 91/100

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2. The Infinite Mirror Paradox by 9Worlds
Cover/Title: 10/10
Blurb: 5/5
Grammar: 17/20
Plot: 19/20
Characters: 17.5/20
Style: 19/20
Personal: 4.5/5
Total: 92/100

1. The Sun That I See Is Named After You by cattleyaon5th
Cover/Title: 7.875/10
Blurb: 5/5
Grammar: 17.5/20
Plot: 19.5/20
Characters: 19/20
Style: 19.5/20
Personal: 4/5
Total: 92.375/100

Hello! I really love how touching your story was! The quotes which you put as an opening paragraph of every chapter was so effortlessly linked to the particular scene of the story. Your moodboards were beautiful and so was your title! Your book cover was so pleasant to look at. However, your title was quite too long. I would suggest either rephrasing it or shortening it for easier recall. There were very minimal errors on the grammar. Overall, it was indeed a heart-wrenching story. I was moved with it. Keep it up! All the best in your writing journey!

This book is amazing and we need more like it. Although, I do have some suggestions. The Sun that I see is named after you could be shortened to 'The Sun I See is Named After You' or 'The Sun is Named After You.' I feel like the love story is moving a bit fast, but if each chapter is a different month, I suppose it's fine. In some places, the dialogue would sound smoother with a comma. In many places, I noticed you had used periods when you wrote I said, he said, etc. When you use dialogue tags like that, use a comma after the dialogue before it. Also, people don't like large paragraphs. Cut them up. Other than that, I really enjoyed your short story and can't wait for more.

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