Book Name - Death Of A Bachelor

Author -    Rikaaraji468  rikaaraji468

Review by - Jumbledsymphony

Summary - It's a tale brewed around Elena Rivera, a noble lady by birth, and General Kieran Hammedatha, a strict soldier. Romance and ladies aren't his cup of tea, but his father pressurizes him to find a wife which implies, he has to interact with ladies. A tedious task for a soldier like him. On the other hand, Elena Rivera too faces the coercion of finding a good aquaintance from her mother. She's robust and she definitely knows how to take her strong stand, an admirable trait.

Personal opinion - The descriptive narration with beautiful words used once in a while has certainly left me impressed. It's rare to find a book on wattpad where author carefully pays attention to even commas, that's a commendable job. It's a treat for people who enjoy a book with good grammar and vocabulary.

   Not to forget about the title, really unique and catchy. It certainly perks up the interest to peek into the novella.

   Generally, in an attempt to make a novel classic, authors use proses which are too purple, but author has certainly done a good job here. Words are balanced out with simple sentence structure.

    Coming to the characters, I really like Elena's character while Kieran is stereotyped a bit. For instance, his charm is irresistible and ladies would do anything for his attention. But on the counter, Elena's reaction certainly cracks me up. It reduces the 'generalised' Kieran and overall, it leaves a good impression.

     Writing style is amalagam of contemporary and classic, a good balance, I shall add.

Recommendation - The only flaw which I could find was that it's a tad longer. Author should try to keep it a bit compact. A lot of description might stir away readers. Also, though the story is written in third person's point of view, still, it gets a bit confusing in few sentences. A bit of work is needed there.
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