Haikyuu Oneshots
MuGmSj

49/100

This is a lovely one-shot book! Haikyuu is one of my favorite fandoms, and I wasn't disappointed by the cuteness of this book. It made my inner fangirl squeal with delight! The characters were very OOC in this, but I loved it anyway. Your title is nice, but try to make it more creative. It's the same with the blurb. Both of them tell what the book is about, but why should people read your one-shots and not somebody else's? What makes your book different from others? While your cover is beautiful, it wasn't complete. Where is the text on it?

Now, it's hard to judge a one-shot book on plot and pace, but I had to deduct some just because it was one-shots. There is little plot and if there is, it's very fast-paced. However, that's the nature of one-shots. In the future, I recommend entering your book in a one-shot category (if applicable) rather than the fanfiction one. For dialogue, please use correct punctuation (quotation marks) and grammar. Speaking of grammar, you had a ton of grammar mistakes, so I recommend going back and editing the book. All in all, there is room for improvement, but don't let that get you down. You are a writer, so write through thick and thin!

The Adventures of Ron and Harry
Harrypotter195604

59/100

This was definitely one of the most original and hilarious Harry Potter fanfics I've read! Well done! However, I'm afraid to say that your title isn't very original. Please try to be more creative with it. Your cover can use some work too, especially with the font and color. Within your blurb and story, I noticed many spelling, grammar, capitalization, and punctuation mistakes. I suggest that you go back and reread and edit your story. Read it out loud. If it sounds off, then it probably is and you should fix it. Use more show than tell.

Also, don't put things in parentheses. I suggest taking your parentheses and making them into complete sentences. Your plot was so-so. There was a plot, but it had many gaps and was all over the place. The pace of the story was a little fast too. All in all, there is room for improvement, but don't let that get you down. Many people can write, but it takes true courage to publish that writing for the rest of the world to see, so kudos to you for doing that!

Several Sunlit Days
Appy008

73/100

This was a nice Harry Potter fanfiction! It made my inner fangirl scream with delight as Hinny is one of my ships! The title and cover were amazing! I love your writing style too! However, this story and blurb don't seem too original. I've read many Hinny fanfics and your's doesn't quite stand out a ton. There were also some grammar mistakes and the plot is a teeny bit wobbly. The pace is on the slower side, but for the most part, it's fine. All in all, there is room for improvement, but you're a wonderful writer. Don't give up!

The Riddles Secret
MaliaaLewis

93/100

Wow! This Harry Potter fanfic was amazing to read! Draco is one of my favorite characters and I've read more Draco fanfics than I probably should, but your book stood out and didn't disappoint at all. Your writing style, pace, plot, characters, blurb, originality, cover were well done! Very aesthetic! However, I did find some grammar mistakes in your writing. I suggest going back and taking the time to edit your book. Read it out loud. If it sounds off, then it probably is and you should fix it. All in all, a lovely book and I can't wait to read your future work!

Until the Very End
Tricky_minds

98/100

Wow! This book was a well-done Harry Potter fanfic and I loved every second of it. I can honestly say that this is one of the best HP fanfics I've ever read. Your story sucked me in and I just couldn't let go or stop reading. I had a hard time finding things for you to improve upon. However, I did see a few grammar mistakes though. I suggest taking the time to go back and edit some of your work. Also, I've noticed that your capitalization was a little off throughout your story and the blurb. Please make sure you are capitalizing words like Death Eater, Dark Lord, etc. They are titles, so they should be capitalized. All in all, though, you're a lovely writer and I can't wait to read your future work. Keep on writing!

Being a Royal in the 1890s
Dont_call_me_ginerva

88/100

I really loved the book! Being a Potterhead myself, I enjoyed reading it. I really liked how you thought of doing something else than just writing the original stories in your words. The cover was really awesome. I also liked the title a lot.

Cartaira | A Storm and Silence Fanfic
HarmioneStark

79/100

The book was good but a little confusing as I'm not familiar with the fandom. But I still enjoyed reading the book. The title and cover were really good. I would have liked a little description of the characters so that the unfamiliar people will also enjoy it more.

Homecoming (Peter Parker x reader)
StrangerSpiderWitch

80/100

The book was good. The cover was awesome. I liked how you described the situation. I really appreciate how you gave a quick introduction to the characters which many authors don't. The pace was good. The plot was also good and unique.

Another Life
VictoriaLachac

71/100

The book was good. Considering the fact that English is not your first language, you described the situation very well! I really liked how you described the look of Loki in the first chapter. I liked the plot too.

His Little Spitfire
NatashaIli

82/100

I really liked the book. It was very interesting. The way you described the scene was awesome. It really helped the reader to understand and imagine the situation as you want. Your vocabulary was also really good.

Silently Loving You
allen_stories

70 / 100

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book. The characters are very lively and interesting, and the reader can greatly relate to them. I especially liked the suspense at the end of each chapter, as it definitely made me want to find out what came next. Overall, this page-turning young adult novel is not something to be missed out on. 

Punishment
prfct-ariana

74 / 100

I liked this story because the author incorporated the famed Greek gods from mythology and the infamous Jack Sparrow. The engaging plot with plenty of drama and suspense will keep you hooked from the very first chapter to the very last moments. If you are a fan of POTC and/or Greek mythology, this adventure is for you.

Ruby Redfort: Secretly Betrayed
sukruthi8

63 / 100

This mystery fanfic based on Lauren Child's series of the same name brings back nostalgic feelings of the tales of your childhood. Charming characters and stimulating conversations will bring smiles to your faces. For anyone searching for a thrilling middle-grade escapade, look no further.

Again One Day
EmpireBlueBB

65 / 100

This heart-wrenching emotional drama has everything a weekend-ready binge needs: a good plot, intriguing characters, old flames, and moments that will require you to bring out the tissues. The photos provided with each chapter help the reader visualize the tale that is being told, and the character development is surprising. Overall, this was a great and highly enjoyable story.

The Blueties & The Beasts
everydaydreamingxxi

DISQUALIFIED

Reason: Book not found

Cobblestone Streets
_ariz0na

78/100

I really enjoyed the book and there were no mistakes or typos so you are nice, keep going! Maybe you can get a better cover for the book. The current one has Julie at the top, Luke in the middle, and Carrie at the last, I guess. If you want to keep the three of them on the cover then probably you can put Carrie in between since she has made some troubles in Juke's relationship and the background is a bit blurry. You can probably get a new cover done by a graphic designer. Have a great day ahead.!

The Phoenix (Wei Wuxian)
hermiosa_reina

81/100

The cover is amazing. The plot and character development and all are done nicely but I think you might as well give some background information about the supporting characters so that readers who have not watched the series would be able to get a better grasp of the situation too. Hope you have a nice day ahead!

Resident Evil : Spirit of Vengeance
QuillWeaver

88/100

The story was very unique and stunning! I loved everything about your plot and character setting! Your imagination shown by this story is other-worldly. All the best for your future work and have a nice day ahead!

Cold Sweetheart
ProdigiousFlames

74/100

Everything is nice and the character of Pallavi is exceptionally unique. You might make some parts a bit more descriptive though. The cover is beautiful. Hope you have a nice day ahead!

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FIRST POSITION
Until the Very End by Tricky_minds

SECOND POSITION
The Riddles Secret by MaliaaLewis

THIRD POSITION
Resident Evil : Spirit of Vengeance by QuillWeaver
Being a Royal in the 1980s by Dont_call_me_ginerva

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