Congratulations to everyone because nobody is a loser. If you didn't win, you can always come back and try again next time.

Secondly, the judges deserve a standing ovation for their speedy and accurate judging. Let's give it to them. Tag your judge and appreciate them. 👏🏽👏🏽

In no particular order, the results :

Mr Invisible
thefutureunheard

90/100

I love it and the pace was great. I am pleased to find a book which not only depicts the loneliness or depression for women but men too. That's why the book was a catch. I love each and every character present but was slightly disappointed by the slight grease of Shyam's presence as if he turned into a thin air. Even though I love the entire plot so far.

Kãma : Liberation
Shivran86

92/100

The most enticing prospect were the characters. You played well enough to inbuilt the 4 characters. The suspense lies in the air as if I can feel it. The four characters and their play along with the implantation of vedic ignite the light of the story. I love each and every part of it and especially the cover page which is a lit.

Shattered
MiniMoxx

85/100

The way you hold till the end was amazing. The blurb of the story welcomed the audience to it. Somehow the grammar statistics loosen the grip and the rough patch of its end didn't make it though. I am slightly sorry for that but I guess next time the grip becomes stronger.

Ophelia?
FarihaIslam0

86/100

The entire story is amazing. I am slightly disappointed when the story tagged Ophelia yet Sandra took the major stage to express her grief. The blurb too was of Ophelia yet the start of the chapter was of Sandra, not Ophelia. That stuck quite an impression on Sandra not Ophelia. Overall the entire plot carried with an amazing scenario which took the sight of the audience.

Trust Me
SugaKookies05

84/100

Every slot was put into focus but kindly enhance the blurb, not that it isn't but I guess a little bit more will look great and make sure to put another cover page. A little pressure on grammar will be good enough. However I am glad it's unique and amazing to read. The part of the protagonist leads a strong characteristic even when she was mute and that was a great catch.

Tethered Souls
OnceUponALily

95/100

Your book is my definition of perfection. Honestly. I'll rewind. So at the time I judged your book, your cover was not changed like it is now, but your previous cover was seriously way better. I love the title of your book; it's very unique and I've seen nothing like it before. You described your characters so well, and you sure know how to weave descriptions into something really magnificent.

However, I didn't give it my full enjoyment because: one- I don't really like long chapters, and two- I don't enjoy it when books are very descriptive as I am just a teen so it's quite hard for me to catch on. Another thing would be about the grammar (I don't know if I'm right or wrong because I've never been called out for it before). I never give anybody full marks for grammar because personally, I believe that nobody is above mistakes and no book on Wattpad is perfectly perfect when it comes to grammar except if they are published in real life. Don't get me wrong, your book was pretty interesting and I definitely won't mark a person down because of my personal interest except for 'Personal Enjoyment' of course, so great job you did there. I hope you entered into the Wattys because I'm pretty sure you stand a good chance. Good luck with your future writing!!

Curses And Kisses
nutellaxgirlx

78/100

Your cover is nice but it's not really explanatory, a bunch of flowers don't tell us anything about the book unless we look into the blurb. Your blurb was quite good, but I felt it lacked some things. The grammar in it was fair, meaning that it could use some editing, and other than that, I think you should try to make it a bit more intriguing.The idea of your book seemed quite cliché (Arranged marriage, heir to the throne, arrogant fiances) but as expected, I enjoyed your book. If there was anything I loved the most about your book, it was the characters. They were nice to read and made the story appear even better.

Winds Of Fate
MarieLotte

92/100

The cover is nice and has this 'Historical' touch to it, but I feel like the font isn't nice enough. The blurb was nice too, but it looked like only one character (Eleanor) made up the whole story which is why I would suggest maybe adding some more character's names, but either ways, your blurb is still good. Overall, some parts of your book felt really cliché and you need to add some sort of humor to lighten the formal mood your book brings. It is a publish worthy book and definitely a book I will recommend to someone.

His Inconvenient Bride
akiimarvelous

80 / 100

Your book is a really good book with a gripping start and remarkable grammar. I would definitely suggest a cover change because it doesn't look too good. Other than that, I can see your book going places.

I'd Rather You Kill Me
queenieexxx

85/100

You know, when I saw the list of books I was to judge, I chose to read yours first because my mindset was 'Let me read the bad books first so I can get over with it and start with the good books', but believe it or not, I read this book till the end. It was soooo interesting and filled with humor. Your characters were wonderful, the storyline, and literally almost everything was fantastic. However, you will need to work on your first impression.

The cover is not nice at all (I am a designer along with lots of more talented designers like azi_raux at MerakiWriters' graphic shop if you want to check it out), Your description was also not intriguing- it was not nice enough. The title...I didn't quite understand and I think it would be better if you thought of another title. Finally, the major issue I had with this book was the ages of your main character, Monica, and her friends.

The fact that they were in middle school and 13 made everything that was happening very unrealistic. I mean, you don't see a 13 year old carrying an unlicensed gun like it's a piece of cake. It would have been better if they were like 18 thereabout. Although I understand that the age '18' was the age a certain character in the book targeted (Trying not to include spoilers), you could have made him 16/17 instead, but definitely not 13. Other than the issues above, I think that your book was pretty fantastic and it pushed me to read other books because it was the first book I judged, and it also gave me motivation to keep on writing, so thank you!

Valence
Aarya2103

85/100

You know, I think we've all looked in the mirror at some point in our lives and wondered at the prospect of a parallel universe on the other side. But even though we might laugh at ourselves pondering such a childish thing, you have made that imaginary into reality! I absolutely love where your story is going, the plot, the world, the ideas, it's all so intriguing. One thing to improve would be the areas of grammar and your own individual writing style.

Presently, some of the descriptions get a bit repetitive or choppy (try finding some cool, new synonyms :), and while the grammar is still good enough to follow the plot, mistakes do mess with the reader's enjoyment of your story. Overall, you have an incredible story building, full of creativity and excitement, just make sure you get the mechanics and details down in the process.

Yungantar ~ Story Of Kauntalya
JyeshthaMalviya

75/100

So after 5 chapters, I have gotten the impression that this is fanfiction? Which would certainly explain my confusion on a lot of parts. However, this is the general fiction category and I have to score in that way, since I obviously have not read whatever your story is based off of.

Also, I believe English is not your first language, and in that case, very well done! Of course, there were errors, a lot of them, but you are well on your way. One thing I can see through the confusion is characters and plot developing, which are key to a well written story. I wasn't able to enjoy it as much as I would've liked, due to feeling lost in all the things I'm supposedly assumed to know, but to someone who is up to date, your story could be great! Keep working on your English and writing, and if this is indeed fanfiction, maybe find a contest for that genre. You may do really well!

Another Chance
Arundhati777

76/100

Wow, this story's picking up! I was definitely getting intrigued. You have great ideas forming and the plot is starting to build, which is super cool to follow. However, some parts of your writing were hard to understand. At some points, you were talking about good events in the plot, but I couldn't tell if it was a back story or something happening at the moment, and it moved just a bit too fast for me to really catch on. Also, try to avoid just listing off things your character is doing, it may bore the reader. Take us INSIDE your story!!

Another thing to try to improve would be the emotions in your characters. How would YOU feel if you were in their situation? Are their reactions realistic? Take time to think through these things, it could work wonders for character development and your overall plot. Your grammar did have some mistakes, but based on the setting and topics of your story, I'm inferring English could be your not primary language, and in that case... wow! Keep up the amazing work, and never lose passion for your writing!

Pride And Promises
thorns_or_roses

90/100

The two rich and sexy business owners who fall in love while forming some company alliance... yeah, a bit cliché, but I can 100% say that this is by far the best telling of it I have ever read! Developed characters, a moving and well paced plot, conflict, side stories, you've got the gist down to perfection :)

One thing to pay attention to is commas, and grammar in general. There were a few too many run-on sentences, and it messed with the wonderful quality of your story! Also, see if you can expand your writing repertoire a bit, maybe with some interesting twists. Of course, this is general fiction, so there aren't magical powers or dragons, but like I said, it was a tad cliché. Overall, just keep writing! That's the best way to improve, and with a few grammatical fixes and enhancements, you'll go far.

Weighted Waters
ariwritesx

88/100

Oh my gosh, I think you made me cry! You have certainly done your research, and even though I don't know a ton about this topic in particular, your knowledge clearly showed in your writing. Not only that, but I loved your writing style, characters, and your developing story! There was that one plot twist about the person she 'killed' though that felt a tiny bit TOO sudden, a bit more foreshadowing into that would make it even more striking.

And there is one major thing I need to point out, since it was a scored category: your story description. I loved that quote there! But it is actually more appropriate as a tagline, in addition to an actual description giving a hint at the story, in a more detailed way that is. The emotions in this book were so powerful, and the real life problems it depicts really made it stand out to me. You have so much power in your , in so many more ways than one <3

Looking Beyond
LyraSerpens

76/100

A good book but felt rushed at some point, and needs a bit of twitching here and there. Try putting your characters to more dialogue: let them interact more and be realistic. Also remove unnecessary words and phrases from your book.

Letter Days
ObsessedInk_writer

77/100

Firstly, you are lucky to have gotten someone from your country as your judge because I understood perfectly. Your cover looks really packed together because there are too many things happening on it and I would definitely suggest for you to change it. The concept of the book was really unique and so was the content, but some parts of your grammar seemed a bit weak. Overall it was a good book. I'd also like to ask something : In your description I saw #4th place Books Got Talent. Did you enter the book into two genres or...?

The Cripple And The King
ShreyaSolaris

84/100

A very good book. You are a living proof that age doesn't determine how great a person can be. You have created a very wonderful plot with amazing characters to live in it.

Operation Phoenix
joyouscharisma

73/100

Your description was interesting and probably the only thing that drew me to read your book. And now that I have read it, I think your book just needs editing and it would be fine. You should enter awards more often because I am positive that your book is capable of winning one, but please change your cover before doing so.

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Konainkhan746

62/100

Your book has a lot of hidden potential. I love the plotline, and I think it does make sense, but it doesn't seem too original. A good book, however. Another suggestion I would give is that : always translate your title please. People get given lower marks if we don't understand the title. I found it a bit hard to read your book because I had to read the actions before reading the translations under which confused me a lot but I managed to pick up later on. I also noticed that you used lower case letters (a, g, s..etc.) to start your sentences which is not correct. If you modify all these, your book should be great in a jiffy. Do not be discouraged by this. It's my opinion, and someone else would say something different. I would love to know what your title means though.

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F I R S T P L A C E

Tethered Souls - OnceUponALily

S E C O N D P L A C E

Winds Of Fate - MarieLotte

Kãma : Liberation - Shivran86

T H I R D P L A C E

Mr Invisible - thefutureunheard

Pride And Promises - thorns_or_roses

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