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Title

5/5

Sector 1

The title is intriguing and eye catching, it especially fits and works for the genre it's in.

Cover

2/5

I'm going to be honest I don't think your current cover works the story nor it is eye catching enough for the genre it is to grab anyone's attention.

Summary

4/5

Overall the summary is good, the repeated use of the word two did get a bit repetitive. However, overall the summary is good.

Plot

4/5

I'm not going to say this plot is one of the kind, never been done before because it has. However, when this type of plot is done well the story is brilliant and this is done well. It works.

Readability

3.8/5

Overall readability is cool but there was for example chapter one the flow is messed up by the layout, the writing would work better at the side rather than the middle.