Missclockmaker

Title:

4/5

I like the title. Its not complicated, it is short, noticeable, and to the points all the things I like in a title.

Cover:

1.5/5

I like the font but the cover looks childish. Nothing about it is eye catching and at first look screams inexperienced writer.

Summary:

2/5

The summary needs a lot of work in the following

• Flow
• Length
• Show, don't tell
• Give something that hooks me and makes me go I have to read this

Plot:

3/5

It isn't the most original plot I've seen but it isn't the most cliché or overdone one either. It has sellability and I liked it.

Readability:

2/5

I'm going to be brutally honest, I struggled to absorb the information you wrote. Ask me in 2 days about something specific in this book I won't be able to tell you.

What's needed

• Smaller paragraphs
• Fixed punctuation
• Turn chapter 1 in a Before you read, any important information or covers can be stored there
• Stop doing author note chapters it is off putting, annoying, and destroys the flow and enjoyment from going from one chapter to the next.