Unknown_Dynasty

Title

5/5

I love the titles. It rolls of the tongue, its vague enough it could be about anything that it piques the interest to checkout the summary.

Cover

2/5

The first issue with the cover is it lacks the title and your author, which it should have. I do like the image used but I don't know I feel its really eye catching but that could be the lack of title.

Summary

3/5

I noticed some flow issues so I fixed the summary for you, feel free to ignore if you prefer your current summary.

At seven years old Lilly Hartwell witnessed the torture and murders of her entire family. Lied to by the police, drowning in despair she wandered the rainy streets of New York City.

Lilly's childhood was spent joining gangs, stealing, in and out of prison.

Eighteen years have passed since her family were killed, now part of the biggest gang in the East Coast Lilly is on a mission to uncover the truth about their deaths. She can't afford to get distract by such a trivial thing as love.

The deeper she dives to find answers, the more questions that come up.

Lost in a world lies, will you ever find out why her family were murdered or will Lilly's digging at the past lead to her ending up like her family?

Plot

4/5

I like the plot. Its really good, with action and mystery.

Readability

3/5

Same issues of flow in the summary applies to your chapters.