DISCLAIMER: I am not, nor do I claim to be, a professional critique. This means I will not catch every mistake and if I say something you don't like or don't agree with, just let me know and maybe even give me tips on how to improve! :)

Author: @WhySwingSet
Book: The Suicide Drifters

CHAPTER ONE:

Just a suggestion; maybe before this paragraph add something to show that there was a time skip.

This all just seems a little bit repetitive. If possible, maybe switch around a few words.

What a great way to end a chapter, and amazing job engaging the readers!

CHAPTER TWO:

This also seems a tad bit repetitive with the car part. Re-phrasing it so was like this, "The car was switched into drive, causing the vehicle to roar to life." (Or something along the lines of that) would solve that issue easily.

I have two things to say about this. One, the semicolon wasn't needed and could be replaced by a comma, and two: it makes me wonder what's going to happen next! Beautiful writing and amazing job!!!

CHAPTER THREE:

What a beautiful, deep and profound thing to say. This was gorgeously worded. That's all I can say. <3

Plot: 50/50 points
Originality: 30/30 points
Spelling/Errors: 15/20 points

Why: I sincerely loved the first three chapters I read. It was so meaningful and profound and it has the raw ability to impact someone's life and make them understand the kind of depression Wyatt has. I have a few tips, as well. I'd recommend making it more of a progression of having Wyatt warm up to Sofia. The second tip is reducing your word repetition. However, that's all for negatives and there are definitely many more positives! Your story was amazing, and please, keep writing!!