AUTHOR - @kitkatluv18

REVIEWER - mssmystic

I am going to be completely honest with this review.

Cover - I would give the cover 7 out of 10. The cover is cute and simple at the same time, it gives a little bit about what the story is about. But the Author could change the font of the story title, cause it's not really clear.

Summary - I really like the summary, it gives a little about what we can expect from the story.

Plot - The plot is really fun and unique. Not a lot of books on Wattpad has 'The bad girl and the good boy' it's nice to see these kinds of books here.

Paragraph/Spacing - The Author has some troubles with starting a new paragraph and spacing which could be solved with simple editing.

The main character, Roxanne is really colorful with her words. I think the Author could hold back a little at swearing. But I really like her personality.

Also, while reading I could tell the Author was in a hurry to finish the chapters.

When Roxy was narrating the things she did right after her mom died. I could tell there was no emotion at all, that the reader could sympathize with her, it felt like she was saying something simple as 'where are the eggs.' The Author should focus more on portraying the emotions. The author is telling more than showing what's happening.

Overall, the story needs some major editing and I will be great. Also, I recommend using the 'Grammarly app' while writing. I would give it three and a half stars out of five