REVIEW 71: Arms Unfolding
Author: TinyAsianExpress
Reviewer: Violette
Cover: Comparing the cover with the story, the cover looks average. It can be more pleasing and fancy which can attract readers.
Summary: The summary is pretty captivating along with the story.
Main Plot: Now, I didn’t find any typos or anything in the story and I like the plot a lot. I like how the protagonist admits her mistake and tries to make it right. But the text doesn’t have to be in the middle. And also, it’s pretty confusing when you jump from one person to the third person.
Other than that, this story is perfect and there isn’t much correction needed.
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