AUTHOR - @MAzhaan3005
REVIEWER - mssmystic

I am going to be completely honest with the review of this story.

Cover - I would give the cover 8 out of 10. the cover portrays the story well. It has a mysterious yet scary look.

Italics - In my opinion, I think the Author should use Italics when the character thinks of something.

Spacing - The author has some troubles with spacing. I think the author should be careful with spacing.

Paragraphs - The first paragraph was long and confusing. the paragraphs are long, some people tend to skip long paragraphs.

Full stops - the author had used this '...' a lot which tends to distract the readers.

The grammar and punctuation are good but the language could be improved. I would recommend using 'Grammarly app' while writing.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this story. I would give it four stars out of five.