Author: Sarakel_14

Reviewer: Violette

Cover: The writer is a very good artist. The covers and banners used inside the book are very attractive. The font and the picture suits the title of the story very well.

Summary: The summary is not very revealing. The writer has written a perfect gist which makes the reader intrigued to check out the book. There is an element of secret/mystery which keeps the reader captive.

Plot: The main part, the prologue was very interesting. The writer has described all of the things very well. The story is moving in its own pace and I like how the story is based in the future. Also, Sarakel is a very interesting individual.

Positive points: The writer is very good with description. Each and every thing is described very carefully and precisely. The author has also shown topics of destruction and corruption which does exist in the real world. The choice of words fit the text perfectly.

Negative points: As the coins have two side, sometimes the description gets unnecessary. Like the writer described the door, which wasn't very necessary. One more thing, there seems a bit of imbalance. It seems like the character's feelings are not put forward properly and there is a lot of description. The writer can't try increasing information about the characters and decrease using details of small things, just to balance out the story.

Character development: Sarakel seems like an odd person. Her emotions are not very much shown and it seems like she doesn't "feel" much. But, nonetheless, her features have been described very clearly, making it easier for the readers to imagine it. The writer can try giving more insight to the protagonist's mind.

Grammar: I found one mistake in the prologue where the writer had written "left you rot" instead of "leave you to rot."

Sorry for the delay in the review, I hope it helped.