AUTHOR: @lunaraquarius

REVIEWER: Luna_Vaethenee

Let me start With SUPER!! I've read two amazing books in one day.

Cover: I like your cover. It shows the strength of a girl even though she's bleeding. It gives a clear image of the story.

Summary: Your summary is 50/50. It's good, it gives me the urge to read. But you did over reveal too much in the summary. After reading the summary, I could guess what's gonna happen.

Plot: Plot's good bit just normal. Has a few plot holes here and there. Example: When Cassie was saved by the old man, he brough her on a boat to Tibet from New York. That makes very little sense. If you were to stumble upon a bleeding person what would you do? Of course this is a fiction book, but logic is still inquired.

Grammar: Grammar is fine needs editing though. Occasionally bump into errors. It's minor ones so it's not a huge problem.

Vocabulary: You have a well expanded vocabulary, but I notice you limit the words you use. Don't be afraid to use big words and hidden meanings. That way, yeah readers will assume you're a talented author.

Sentence Structure: I honestly like how you write your sentences. It's nice and strategic, if that's the right word. So got no problem here.

Originality: Actually, your book isn't that original (NO OFFENSE!) I've read books where someone possesses a rare power and runs from people who want it. But besides that, you're good! Not too cliche, sometimes is. But that's OK. Cliche isn't bad at all.

Just going to say I love your book. I can't wait to see it bloom 💖