AUTHOR: @kailinekaze

REVIEWER: theendofeverything03

The cover of the book was amazing...it was colourful..mysterious and suited the book perfectly.

The story was also kinda different than the others...it was interesting and I ended up reading till the end. It was about a girl Anoki (A really rare and pretty name) whose life changed when she decided to help a stranger.

The truth is still not out there and I really wanna know about what she turned into when she drank from that chalice.

The inroductions kf the character were not very brief. Anoki has two brothers and a sister, about whom we don't know much. The writer can talk a bit more about the characters, so that can be improved.

About the punctuation and grammar. Grammar was good, didn't find any major mistakes there. But, during the dialogues, there was some spacing problems. Like the writer could have left a line or two to make it look more near and attractive.

Also, when the character was thinking something in her mind, the font could have been changed to italics so that the readers would know it.

Other than that, the book is absolutely amazing.

Final Rating - ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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