AUTHOR: @ameliahurt

REVIEWER: Luna_Vaethenee

Before I start, I'm going to recommend everyone to go and read this book. It's Amazing!

We'll start with your cover. I liked your cover, like a 50/50. It's simple yet beautiful. It made me think this was a love story at the first place, so I got slightly confused there. It's still OK.

Your summary is well written. You explained things well and didn't expose too much of the story. That's good, because it's up to the reader to find out what happens next.

The plot is remarkable! It flowed well, nothing stopping it from being good. The characters developed precisely when suitable.

Grammar. Your grammar is quite good, with a few mistakes here and there. But I'm sure with a little editing, you'll get rid of them all.

Your vocabulary is surprisingly well expanded. You used words that I seldom hear in a story. Your writing made me wonder, are you a fan of Enid Bylton?

I think your sentence structure is no problem at all. You know what to write and where the sentence should be. Since your sentence structure is so good, your plot is good too.

Originality, I can't say your book is that original because I happened to read a book that had the similar situation and story flow. But I'm not saying you're copying. Try making the story stand out more. Maybe a plot twist? Or a new character? That's entirely up to you.

In the end, I can say this author is a really good writer and can go far. He/She just needs to edit through their books and we've got a masterpiece.