AUTHOR: @Pritika1106

REVIEWER: Luna_Vaethenee

Hey, another book by @Pritika1106
Let's get started, shall we?

I've read the whole book before and it's AWESOME!!! Recommended to those who love a good fantasy adventure!

Your cover...Damn! I think you should know by now how great your covers are! You are really dedicated into making them and know how to relate the plot to the cover. If you all check out my book, The Witch Queen (Strider Series Book 2), the cover was made by Pritika herself! Amazing, right?!

What about your summary? I'll start with the slightly negative point first. I think your summary reveals too much of the story. No offense, but the summary went all the way to where the girls are supposed to defeat Alaric. If I were you, I would have wrote the summary until where the girls were brought into the other world. But besides that, I love how you wrote your summary. Well explained.

Plot. Ah, this shouldn't be a problem for you. One thing I notice about your books are that they are well planned out. The plot is smooth and clearly wrote. Like Love Beyond Pain, your characters really stand out and always can be remembered. Violet, Fleur, and LUKE! Damn I love Luke.

Grammatically, you're fine! You have a wonderful gift at writing! The way you explain things in your story, it's miraculous! It's like I'm looking from the main character's point of view. A good usage of adjectives, punctuation and vocabulary.

I don't see anything wrong with your sentence structure. They're simple yet perfect! There are sometimes where you write too lengthy sentences, which is a risk. What is it that you risk? You risk making more mistakes in writing. You also have high chances of confusing the readers. A little editing can solve that!

Vocabulary. Yours is very big and we'll expanded. All words that you use are used correctly and appropriately. Based on your works, I assume that you're a huge book worm(no offense). Reading is one of the major ways to expand vocabulary. So if you like reading, continue doing so! You'll wrote better and better!

When it comes to originality, I'll give you a 70/100. Of course, it's hard to be original in Wattpad when many people think and write alike. The transfered into another world and suppose to save them kind of sounds like Harry Potter (kind of, I'm not blaming you for copying!) But after that, it was original. I've never read anything like it honestly. And I've read a decent amount of books.

In conclusion, The Lights Of The Other World is an amazing book! I know this book had a long way to go! Just a few touch ups here and there are needed. 💜