AUTHOR: @pritika1106

REVIEWER: Luna_Vaethenee

Let me just start with WOW! I know I'm supposed to only read seven chapter, but I got all the way to chapter 14!

The plot was well planned. It went well and the characters' development went well with the plot.

The story flow, it wasn't too fast nor too slow. Just perfect! Even though the story started at when Mia was heading for the competition, everything was well explained and there wasn't anything I couldn't understand or relate to.

What about the characters? The characters are very easy to remember. Like Mia's dad for example, it was easy to remember him because he never looks at someone when he talks while eating. Or Mia who loves to dance but hates her legs. You know, interesting characteristics of a character. When I read most stories, I'll remember the main characters and some side characters. Then when I'm done with the book, I'll completely forget their name. I have read your books before, and I really loved it.

Yes, I remember Callidora Flinn.

Grammar. I think your grammar was 50/50 but that's a good thing. I don't think we've seen anyone write eithba spot on grammar. You write well, but some spelling mistakes are there. Like when you want to spell 'love' but you type 'live' instead. But it's alright, auto-correct always happens. If you check out my books, there will be mistakes like this too, so you're not alone.

Hmm... Sentence structure? I think you're sentence structure is OK. But sometimes when you elaborate something, you make the sentence linger and longer. When we tend to write longer sentences, we make more mistakes. Instead, try to write in slightly shorter sentences.

That brings me to punctuation. Punctuation was good. There are a few errors here and there, but it's fine.

In conclusion, I really love LOVE BEYOND PAIN. The story is captivating, you've done a wonderful job! Just a few typing errors. I suggest you complete the book then come back for an editing process.