AUTHOR: @Night_Lock

REVIEWER: theendofeverything03

I'm gonna be honest throughout the review.

I would give the cover an 8. The description was interesting, it made me curious about the story.

The name given to the characters are pretty unique and impressive. Also, the different kind of species like Rabbitbashers were great. The story revolves around Frid as 13 year old Hoodlum who is planning on becoming a trained warrior.

I read 7 chapters and I would like to say that the story is nicely imagined. The characters were also introduced well. The friendship shown between Frid and Hellgor is also good.

There were some spelling mistakes here and there but the punctuation and grammar was on point.

I would give this story a four and a half stars on 5. Will definitely continue to read it :)