Title: Ten Wishes Across Reality

Author: Hello1925

Rate: 8.8

Review: Firstly, thank you so much for requesting.

  I love how descriptive your writing is. The amount of detail is just beautiful. Your writing style is very interesting, and I've never read anything like it. It really kept my intrest and I would definitely recommend it to others.

  I don't think I really have any criticism, except that I'm a stickler over indentation. Also, making the speech bold kind of threw me off, but I don't think it's really a bad thing.

  Keep up the good work!