Cover (3/5): with the genre being a mystery/ thriller, I wasn't sure if it would strike me as a mystery/ thriller book upon first glance

Book Description (4/5): I found the description to be intriguing. At the first line, I wanted to know more.

Plot (3/5): although I found there to be great potential, I did notice a few writing and grammar errors (which I did make comments about)

Character development (3/5): I do find the characters to have great potential. Even though there's only a few chapters, I can see these characters being the type that people connect with. Keep it up!