Misssss Solana finally released the album after the delay I was legit supposed to post a review sooner but I was tired I was up all night waiting for the album 🤚😭it never came.
    But it's here now 😭

If any of you listened to the album what is your favorite song on there.
  I so much love Diamond boy 😝.
 
Ngl I have become so lazy to write these reviews and that kinda sucks because I wanna post all my drafts before going Mia 😭.
  Christmas is in like 4 days.

Ps: I'm currently listening to the album because what not been on repeat since it's release.

Now shall we get to this review.
   Oh and it seems like most of you all have taken some break from Wattpad because views have dropped same as votes and comments 😭
    And the authors who ask for these reviews don't even check them out I was ranting in the last chapter check it out .
    Sorry again let's get to this review

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Author:Nightmare2422

Genre: Short story

Status: Complete

My thoughts:
     First off I genuinely don't like your book cover it's just so plain 🥲😔😃and sad for no reason.
   Ok you gave me a shout out at the end of chapter one and that was kinda sweet ngl 😭 and you did it in your book so thank you so much but I still gotta tell you about your book.
  Surprisingly punctuations and paragraphing wasn't bad at all.
    Your plot is super weak everything is rushed.

   His parents dying, his crush,his diagnosis that was just to much for the first chapter I mean there wasn't even a prologue just bam in my face 😃.
    Your book description is quite poor.

Oh and the part where one of his friends was like she did a research on him and figured he had a sister I mean if you all have been friends for a while why are you investing wouldn't you know.
     And it's not like she is some kinda master mind in tracking people 😃.
    Wouldn't his so called sister be at the funeral (for the parents) ??

They where some typos here and there
   Chapter 2 was so rushed meeting his sister  -- going to the hospital -- the kiss -- dying 😭

It felt like while writing you just wrote what ever idea came to your mind and that kinda made your book a little bit over the place.

If you do consider re writing I suggest you take your time have fun writing but also write something great/good so you have a great ass audience.
   How long have you been writing??

What was the inspiration behind this book ??

To my readers:

I would obviously still tell you all to check it out because why not I'm not the only one that is going to give an opinion you all are also reviewer's in a way.
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Hope you all are having a great day ❤️

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                                 ~Lonleyloner2007 ☄️🪐