So guys I'm gonna try to post most of the reviews I have written before Christmas I don't think I'm gonna post any after Christmas going on some mini break might be back by January tho.
   Anyway I hope you all enjoy all the reviews that are incoming.
  Last review was quite short so I'm gonna say this now because I didn't have much to say about the book probably because it was poetry I don't think I would be reviewing any book that is poetry yes the genre Poetry won't be reviewed here anymore 😔.
    But it's good I guess
Anyway thank you all for getting us to 6k reads the goal was 10k before the year ends but anyway still great full

Now for this review

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Author: avaracher

Genre: Action - Adventure

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

Prologue didn't really feel like a prologue felt like a whole chapter on its own beginning was starting off great but you have some errors alot you kinda made use of the comma so much 😭 that was disturbing 🥲.
   Spacing was off and on some times your book spacing was going well and the rest it kinda changed being clustered and all.

The main chapter itself( chapter 1 ) was worse in terms of spacing you legit just wrote it all in a go which didn't look very nice if I'm being honest.
    Spacing makes your work more defined and good you can get reference from some of your favorite books.

Your book description is actually really good and your book cover was also on board real great job on that.
   You really need to edit because of your punctuations.
   Chapter 2 seems to be spaced
  Do you write here on Wattpad or you write some where else and then export it here ??

To my readers:.
     Ngl it was a good read aside the little errors here and there it was actually good.
  You all should check it out add it to your readers list you can see it in mine " Books I have reviewed" some of the books I have reviewed can be seen there.

    Vote and comment if you feel like you have an opinion you would like to share ensure to tell the author probably in the comments or on their message board.
   Hope you all are having a great day tho.

So today there wouldn't be any questions but if you guys have any feel free to ask I'm open to answering your questions😌

Have a great day you all

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                                      ~Lonleyloner2007🤠💦