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Author: AbeerMohamed716821

Genre: Short story

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

Well your book description was kinda good short but it kinda had some depth to it
Kinda reminded me of the pandemic in 2020 have you all heard about the new one going on in china ??

Punctuation errors 🥲yep I kinda noticed lots of misuse of certain punctuation marks
Not really going with your prologue I don't know it's not as captivating like I expected it .
It's kinda short yeah some prologues are short but yours was short and not really captivating to me tho 🤷.

Your chapter length are really inconsistent they are all short but some are like 4 scrolls that is when reading in paging how many word do you have per character??

Feels like you have reached a writers block or something
But anyway I think your book would actually be liked and read ( People who fw your books genre)
Not really a fan of your book cover

But I would say if you wanna attract some readers you need to work on your book description I feel like the key to every good book would definitely be the book description and yours could use some work.

Your spacing and paragraphing where actually really good spot on I like how that was executed ❤️

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Questions for the author 🥲

Was this book kinda inspired by COVID-19 ??

What inspired you to start writing and how do you think your writing journey has been going so far ??

Favourite author and book on Wattpad ??

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