Ummmm

So who has watched wicked I wanna watch it so bad I think I have said this before but I wanna see why you all cried been seeing clips lips on TikTok tho and it seems like it's gonna be worth it.
     So I wanna try coffee never had one before 😔 and I wanna be awake at night for some reason it's wierd but I don't really give a fug.
    I think I have been cussing a lot lately.

Mind you its almost midnight and I'm hungry 😔ughhhhh I'm so lazy rn
    I think that is enough unnecessary talk for today now let's get to this review.

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Author:Faithmonz

Genre: Historical

Status: Ongoing

My thoughts:

First off for your prologue there where some words that where misspelled probably a typo or sum,your punctuations some weren't necessary in one paragraph felt like there where over used I mean yeah
    For example in chapter 1 in a paragraph this was there "my name.is.something" (these weren't the actual words but the misuse of full stop tho also the " and your comma it might be seen as something that could be overlooked but I'm pretty sure some readers are particular about those things 🥲.

Oh I absolutely love your book cover it's just like really good tho,it suits your book real well  although we could work on the font size you used for the book cover it's to big it really can't be fully seen and your book description is quite there first of how old are your characters ?? Or preferably there age range.
      I'm asking because in the description it kinda seems like the lady has been headol over heels for him since her entire life🌚.

     Your chapter length😔how many words per chapter I felt like chapter 1 was at a right state because this is like a new book and you are still an upcoming author and then moving to the next chapter and then sliding like 3 times is quite disheartening 😔.
    You might be new to writing but I don't think readers like short updates especially for a book with a genre like yours "Historical romance" .

So far with what I read I think your book should be going good if you maybe increase the length of chapters,work on your punctuations your paragraphs and spacing are just fine,your book description a little bit of sprinkle sprinkle wouldn't be so bad,and the book cover for the fint size for the title name that needs to be edited.

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To my readers:

Ummmm I think you all should check this one out you know to read and also to check if you all could also find any faults because I feel like you all are the biggest reviewers😂
    Don't be silent be vocal about your thoughts
   Vote comment and engage with the author I'm sure they wouldn't mind.

Vote for this chapter, comment and just show some love.
    Still haven't watched wicked but hey I'm not dying 😂😭.
    Hope you all have a great day
Oh and you all be telling me like the time and where you all are when you get my review update I think those are like cool

Ps: 500+ words I've been writing more than 400 words lately 😂😂