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Hola hola here again let's get to this review 🍃👽

Book genre∆¿
    Fanfiction//Romance

Author∆¿
    btshiteu20

Book status∆¿
    Ongoing

My thoughts∆¿
   Ok first of your first chapter was  not bad but I think everything is so clustered like you have few paragraphs which I think made your work rough I guess.
   Your punctuations where also 🤷at some placed but not all.
Oh I also noticed you used some abbreviations in some chapters.
But never the less I think your books plot is actually nice you know.
  Not everyone is perfect but I think your bokk can and would be better ❤️❤️
   It just needs some few editing and you are good to go.
   Ps:I didn't say any of this to discourage you from writing 🤷❤️😌

What inspired you to write this book→→→→→→→

When and where did you decide to publish it here on Wattpad →→→→→→→→

My ratings∆¿
     So this book was good to read and here are my ratings.

For your book itself I would be giving and rating it a 6.5 because I enjoy your plot and I know with time your book would get even better❤️

For your book cover I would give it a 6.5 also .

And finally your book description like I always say I think every books description is like the foundation of a book and for yours I would say that it needs more work❤️

   Basically on there you could give a snippet of your story I guess🤷just be creative ❤️

To my readers∆¿
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